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I'm Making It
Always waiting,
I'm always
w
a
i
t
i
n
g
I'm never sure
If I'll make it
Every Breath
A chance,
Eclectic pauses
A didactic life
Of seemingly never-to-be plummets,
An abyss in wait
Teetering on the edge
Living a life of morbid expectation
Forever nervous
Casting glances inwards,
Trying to glean a better understanding of my
'Assumed' executioner
The product of an ever-present
Death Wish
Never sure of the day that'll be my last,
The judgment day
But so far,
I'm making it
I'm always
w
a
i
t
i
n
g
I'm never sure
If I'll make it
Every Breath
A chance,
Eclectic pauses
A didactic life
Of seemingly never-to-be plummets,
An abyss in wait
Teetering on the edge
Living a life of morbid expectation
Forever nervous
Casting glances inwards,
Trying to glean a better understanding of my
'Assumed' executioner
The product of an ever-present
Death Wish
Never sure of the day that'll be my last,
The judgment day
But so far,
I'm making it
Published 31st Aug 2012
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6th Sep 2012 9:37am
let me just say right now, your voice is made for this. beautiful read with perfect expression, not even a little overdone; in fact, the poem is better for it. wouldn't have appreciated it on the page without that expression, i think. good call. [:
6th Sep 2012 9:42am
Thank you, that means alot but as far as voices go mine pales in comparison to the crystal clear sound you exude.
