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My house forever broken
My house is forever broken, by mistakes...lies, and deceit.
Doors blown open and off hinges by the revelations, that my house is forever broken.
There are storms brewing inside my tortured soul. they threaten to swallow me whole.
Now...right now..right here in the calm after the storms pass.
You notice.
Torn apart... taken and shaken to the foundation, amidst debris and shattered glass.
I live in the remains of my forever broken house.
Here I stay no kids...no spouse. Trying to rebuild my broken house....forever.
Doors blown open and off hinges by the revelations, that my house is forever broken.
There are storms brewing inside my tortured soul. they threaten to swallow me whole.
Now...right now..right here in the calm after the storms pass.
You notice.
Torn apart... taken and shaken to the foundation, amidst debris and shattered glass.
I live in the remains of my forever broken house.
Here I stay no kids...no spouse. Trying to rebuild my broken house....forever.
Published 31st Aug 2012
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2012 1:14pm
This caught my eye and I could identify with those feelings so strongly.
Excellent poem and a powerful read.
Write on
Peace
Kitty
Excellent poem and a powerful read.
Write on
Peace
Kitty
31st Aug 2012 1:58pm
Brother Bud we, the ones who have lived that sorrow, understand that the hardest part is standing up in the midst of the destruction and finding hope in life for a better tomorrow, the first thing you need is, love...
Red
Red
Anonymous
1st Sep 2012 2:24am
Well done and heartfelt. Strider
2nd Sep 2012 00:34am
1st Sep 2012 12:30pm
Forever is a long time to rebuild. Profound write,nicely penned and expressed.
2nd Sep 2012 00:36am
Thank you. It was written with my raw emotion in a matter of minutes, I wasn't sure it would be well accepted. I was wrong it seems.
13th Sep 2012 5:09pm
such a dramatic post. the display of emotions is so honestly presented. Especially liked the line, "There are storms brewing inside my tortured soul. they threaten to swallow me whole." well done.
13th Sep 2012 7:37pm
