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Alone is just a concept
There is a silence in my head
that shies away from all thoughts of you
and the haunting recollection of our words
The days pass in acceptable emptiness
maybe the sun shone, I wouldn’t know
when I am too busy looking inwards
My grand escapist gesture
to get lost in the pages of a book
where I know I won’t find your face
When night trickles in with a garnishing of frost
my bed seems like a grave without you
and my silence screams for some kind of noise
just so I don’t have to sleep alone
© Indie Adams 2012
that shies away from all thoughts of you
and the haunting recollection of our words
The days pass in acceptable emptiness
maybe the sun shone, I wouldn’t know
when I am too busy looking inwards
My grand escapist gesture
to get lost in the pages of a book
where I know I won’t find your face
When night trickles in with a garnishing of frost
my bed seems like a grave without you
and my silence screams for some kind of noise
just so I don’t have to sleep alone
© Indie Adams 2012
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Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 11:29am
It's as if I ripped out my heart and told you to write what it tells you.
Again, you never cease to amaze.
Thank you, Indie.
~xXx~
Again, you never cease to amaze.
Thank you, Indie.
~xXx~
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re: Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 11:33am
Wow, thank you so much Rachel, for your awesome comment and adding this to your list. Much appreciated. :) I'm glad this one was reachable to you.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 12:24pm
Egyptian cotton bartered out for wooden fibered pages, all at the hands of what, these social expectations? Alone is the concept. Vision to you for a sultry lavender that weighs 15 stones. Nice read.
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re: Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 12:28pm
Thank you Mr Turtle for your interesting comments :) Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 12:56pm
Beautiful poem Miss Indie. "There is a silence in my head that shies away from all thoughts of you
and the haunting recollection of our words". Words written by a true poet! Thank you.
and the haunting recollection of our words". Words written by a true poet! Thank you.
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re: Re: Alone is just a concept
28th Aug 2012 7:36am
Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 3:13pm
My grand escapist gesture
to get lost in the pages of a book
where I know I won’t find your face
Exactly!! This is a great short explanation of the 'concept' <3
to get lost in the pages of a book
where I know I won’t find your face
Exactly!! This is a great short explanation of the 'concept' <3
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re: Re: Alone is just a concept
28th Aug 2012 7:38am
Thanks so much Jordanne, for your lovely comment, so glad to see you back. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: Alone is just a concept
27th Aug 2012 11:55pm
Awesome!! Haha indie I'm glad I started following you. You write well. And you put a lot of detail into a small poem. I love that . I'm not into long drawn out poems. This was great.
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re: Re: Alone is just a concept
28th Aug 2012 7:39am
Re: Alone is just a concept
13th Oct 2012 8:47am
This is not my style at all but I still appreciate it very much so, in fact. This was a heartfelt poem. Good Job, Miss Indie.
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13th Oct 2012 8:58am