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I am
I wonder what its like to live
I hear the darkness beckoning me
I see nothing but the endless darkness
I want to have my soul back
I am alone
I pretend I'm alive
I feel like I am brushing against reality
I touch the cool watery darkness as it slips through my fingers
I worry about how i'm going to last here
I cry for my lost soul
I am alone
I understand I will never be alive again
I say I can't ever find my soul
I dream one day i can find peace
I try to seek for my rest
I hope for a way out
I am alone
I hear the darkness beckoning me
I see nothing but the endless darkness
I want to have my soul back
I am alone
I pretend I'm alive
I feel like I am brushing against reality
I touch the cool watery darkness as it slips through my fingers
I worry about how i'm going to last here
I cry for my lost soul
I am alone
I understand I will never be alive again
I say I can't ever find my soul
I dream one day i can find peace
I try to seek for my rest
I hope for a way out
I am alone
Published 23rd Aug 2012
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24th Aug 2012 4:32am
I adore this, you have true potential. Don't see that often enough.
"I feel like I am brushing against reality
I touch the cool watery darkness as it slips through my fingers"
This is particularly lyrical and breathtaking. Good job. Feel free to stop by and comment a poem or two. I think you'd like Lighter, for a Change, and He is Darkness.
I will be prescribing to your updates. Going in my reading list.
AlwaysCaliban
"I feel like I am brushing against reality
I touch the cool watery darkness as it slips through my fingers"
This is particularly lyrical and breathtaking. Good job. Feel free to stop by and comment a poem or two. I think you'd like Lighter, for a Change, and He is Darkness.
I will be prescribing to your updates. Going in my reading list.
AlwaysCaliban
24th Aug 2012 6:13am
I thank you so!
Your words have made me think and i will look at your poems, if all goes well ill subscribe to you too!
Your words have made me think and i will look at your poems, if all goes well ill subscribe to you too!
24th Aug 2012 7:12am
Many has been the time in my own life when I felt the exact way that you describe so eloquently in your darkly beautiful poem. Lonely, striving for life and trying to live it to my very utmost... despite old fears, and losses that were hard to bear. I too thought my soul was lost and strove to find it again... and find it I did in the end. Though the way can be dark sometimes, it is never hopeless! Even in the darkness, there is light.
Thank you for sharing your dark journey here. Now you know you are not alone, my friend! :)
Thank you for sharing your dark journey here. Now you know you are not alone, my friend! :)
