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Falling
1.
All the
apple trees
came out
in blossom.
Today is
very bright,
with a pure
sky: the willow
is full of
green. All
things are
in bud.
2.
In my
heart the
deepest peace:
clear, lucid
and quiet,
like the girl
on the plateau,
completed by
pearls. Everything
is falling
into place.
All the
apple trees
came out
in blossom.
Today is
very bright,
with a pure
sky: the willow
is full of
green. All
things are
in bud.
2.
In my
heart the
deepest peace:
clear, lucid
and quiet,
like the girl
on the plateau,
completed by
pearls. Everything
is falling
into place.
Published 15th Aug 2012
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16th Aug 2012 9:36am
'Everything
is falling
into place.'
If I had the time and space i would have written pages long about that line. It evokes so much emotion and many interpretations, meanings, latent and somewhat manifested. As simple as a haiku even though it's a bit lengthy to be one. I would suggest you try writing some and see how it goes.
is falling
into place.'
If I had the time and space i would have written pages long about that line. It evokes so much emotion and many interpretations, meanings, latent and somewhat manifested. As simple as a haiku even though it's a bit lengthy to be one. I would suggest you try writing some and see how it goes.
21st Aug 2012 7:21pm
18th Apr 2014 1:13am
