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Open mic night
I’m going to fuck you
while reading
your poetry
aloud.
You’ll be on the couch,
unsuspecting until the moment
I click into the room on
high heels made of sin,
in a scene
right out of Rocko's school for
softcore-porn
A binder filled with
crotch-inspired dross
in one hand,
the other lightly tracing up
the long, long length
of my cool white thigh,
clad in thin, black, lace.
And you’re going to lean back
amused, waiting to see what I’ve come up with,
until I drop my knees on either side of you,
slam your shoulders
against the couch
rip your shirt off between
feral kisses,
dispelling your
amusement
like smoke in a
tornado.
With the same
heedless mercy,
I’m going to ride you —
contrary to the build up —
slowly,
while reciting the best ofs
from my second
favorite
staff
(your pen)
And just to see how it feels
with your breath on my neck,
I might turn things around,
sink back on you,
facing away yet fully
enveloped,
my back molded to
your front
as your tense arms
find their way around me,
take the pages from me
and correct
my inflection
while I recall
the exquisite agony
of being
(recreated)
within the dark forest
of your mind.
I'm going to
fuck
you
while reading your poetry aloud.
It's only fair, love,
since within those words
you've so irrevocably
fucked me
while reading
your poetry
aloud.
You’ll be on the couch,
unsuspecting until the moment
I click into the room on
high heels made of sin,
in a scene
right out of Rocko's school for
softcore-porn
A binder filled with
crotch-inspired dross
in one hand,
the other lightly tracing up
the long, long length
of my cool white thigh,
clad in thin, black, lace.
And you’re going to lean back
amused, waiting to see what I’ve come up with,
until I drop my knees on either side of you,
slam your shoulders
against the couch
rip your shirt off between
feral kisses,
dispelling your
amusement
like smoke in a
tornado.
With the same
heedless mercy,
I’m going to ride you —
contrary to the build up —
slowly,
while reciting the best ofs
from my second
favorite
staff
(your pen)
And just to see how it feels
with your breath on my neck,
I might turn things around,
sink back on you,
facing away yet fully
enveloped,
my back molded to
your front
as your tense arms
find their way around me,
take the pages from me
and correct
my inflection
while I recall
the exquisite agony
of being
(recreated)
within the dark forest
of your mind.
I'm going to
fuck
you
while reading your poetry aloud.
It's only fair, love,
since within those words
you've so irrevocably
fucked me
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Re: Open mic night
10th Aug 2012 1:51am
Script fucked...lights a smoke,reflects
Damn hot betty, crystal clear and the italicized fuck you, and closing lines add a little slow appreciation to what got this engine roaring. Thanks much...no seriously,thank you
Damn hot betty, crystal clear and the italicized fuck you, and closing lines add a little slow appreciation to what got this engine roaring. Thanks much...no seriously,thank you
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re: Re: Open mic night
10th Aug 2012 2:25am
Re: Open mic night
Anonymous
10th Aug 2012 4:18am
High heels made of sin, holy yes.
Betty, this is spicy and classy all at the same time. I love it!
(and I think I might have to steal your idea, wish I had thought of it).
You woman have a well versed roar!
On my reading list.
Betty, this is spicy and classy all at the same time. I love it!
(and I think I might have to steal your idea, wish I had thought of it).
You woman have a well versed roar!
On my reading list.
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re: Re: Open mic night
10th Aug 2012 4:21am
Bad. Ass. Comment!
Thanks Aish!
Steal away my dear. No higher form of praise than emulation.)
(I was called a tiger. Do tigers roar? I think they just make constipated chuffing sounds and snarl. Not quite as sexy as a roar, but you work what you have, right?)
Thanks again for the read.
B
Thanks Aish!
Steal away my dear. No higher form of praise than emulation.)
(I was called a tiger. Do tigers roar? I think they just make constipated chuffing sounds and snarl. Not quite as sexy as a roar, but you work what you have, right?)
Thanks again for the read.
B
re: re: Re: Open mic night
Anonymous
10th Aug 2012 4:52am
Tigers are my favorite. Majestic, gorgeous, perfect creatures. Be very proud of being a tigress, my dear. :)
I think they growl and chuff and almost talk, but do not roar like a lion.
Hey, you're welcome! You deserve it. I'm very pleased to have found your personal space here at DU. Write on!
I think they growl and chuff and almost talk, but do not roar like a lion.
Hey, you're welcome! You deserve it. I'm very pleased to have found your personal space here at DU. Write on!
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Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 3:54am
I don't have much to add but just wanted to say that this is another brilliant piece from you.
Keep firing away Betty, you rock!
Keep firing away Betty, you rock!
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re: Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 4:23am
Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 2:01pm
Steel cable and a calligraphic wench, you make me think too much to stop and not enough to continue without.....well, I'll just say it was instructive.....thanks.
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re: Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 2:38pm
That was a seriously awesome comment. Thank you.
Steel cable and a calligraphic wench. AWESOME. I love broken phrasing. I do. I appreciate, as always, your time, and I love that little clause.
Thanks,
B
Steel cable and a calligraphic wench. AWESOME. I love broken phrasing. I do. I appreciate, as always, your time, and I love that little clause.
Thanks,
B
Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 3:48pm
I've had a many "open mic nights" but never one as hot or as erotic as this one. U fucked me.....reading someone elses poetry. So damned voyeuristically. Got me there. Whew!!!!!
Eloquent and excellent Betty, Betty!
Eloquent and excellent Betty, Betty!
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re: Re: Open mic night
11th Aug 2012 4:45pm
Re: Open mic night
Anonymous
12th Aug 2012 00:02am
'take the pages from me
and correct
my inflection
while I recall
the exquisite agony
of being
(recreated)
within the dark forest
of your mind.'
so. great. i'm still so grateful that you're here to raise the standards in the 'erotic' category, as it was seriously lacking.. you.. before your arrival.
:]
and correct
my inflection
while I recall
the exquisite agony
of being
(recreated)
within the dark forest
of your mind.'
so. great. i'm still so grateful that you're here to raise the standards in the 'erotic' category, as it was seriously lacking.. you.. before your arrival.
:]
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re: Re: Open mic night
12th Aug 2012 00:09am
Re: Open mic night
21st Aug 2012 12:44pm
If ever and not saying it will happen I get to a point when this does not make me ink myself I'll abandon returning for sustenance and a need to breath. This is not merely an image. Betty.
rt87
rt87
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re: Re: Open mic night
21st Aug 2012 10:36pm
You already commented on this, stalker.
I'd say thanks but I'm busy signing Mr. Restraining Order.
Just kidding.
(Maybe)
Thanks, turtle,
Betty
I'd say thanks but I'm busy signing Mr. Restraining Order.
Just kidding.
(Maybe)
Thanks, turtle,
Betty
Re: Open mic night
21st Aug 2012 3:43pm
I've got a stiff round of applause for you! Great use of your words and images.
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re: Re: Open mic night
21st Aug 2012 10:37pm
Re: Open mic night
26th Apr 2013 7:38pm
I really enjoyed this -- you are giving me very good ideas here....... ;)
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re: Re: Open mic night
27th Apr 2013 1:28am
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2023 6:09pm
Man it's good to read this again!!! I ran here 1🙂
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24th Feb 2023 6:11pm
Re: Re. Open mic night
Anonymous
24th Feb 2023 6:13pm
I OUTLOUD SAID YES!!!!!
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