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Estrogen Molotov Cocktail
You dream of the rare marble
I fantasize about only you
Who would never chance a beggar
Even if he gave all for you
No, it’s all about the perfection
Chiseled and somewhat bland
But it’s worth a whole lot
And the sex is pretty good
So what if the shine blinds you?
Does it matter that it cuts you?
Left bleeding in that abyss
Allow me to throw you a rope
So you can hang yourself with it
I fantasize about only you
Who would never chance a beggar
Even if he gave all for you
No, it’s all about the perfection
Chiseled and somewhat bland
But it’s worth a whole lot
And the sex is pretty good
So what if the shine blinds you?
Does it matter that it cuts you?
Left bleeding in that abyss
Allow me to throw you a rope
So you can hang yourself with it
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Re: Estrogen Molotov Cocktail
31st Jul 2012 3:04am
Well I'm not sure, I'm able to follow the imagery, other than you're willingness to help them kill themselves.
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31st Jul 2012 3:48am
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31st Jul 2012 4:16pm
Nice write here Robert.
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31st Jul 2012 4:22pm
Re: Estrogen Molotov Cocktail
31st Jul 2012 4:55pm
wow great i love satirical writes! read your blog too, the surrealism section is becoming my favourite. you should post them here!
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31st Jul 2012 5:17pm
Thank you very much! I'm getting to it. Can only post 2 poems an hour on here.
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31st Jul 2012 7:02pm
nice,
1 suggestion, try not to use the "extreme content" block on writes that arent so dark for more viewership.
you might be suprise how "dark" the needed "extreme content dark" gets in here.
1 suggestion, try not to use the "extreme content" block on writes that arent so dark for more viewership.
you might be suprise how "dark" the needed "extreme content dark" gets in here.
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Yeah, this was the first poem I posted here so I wasn't completely accustomed to how brutal people's poems are here. And it won't let me change the filter when I try to edit it.
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1st Aug 2012 00:49am
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1st Aug 2012 1:38am
Re: Estrogen Molotov Cocktail
1st Aug 2012 1:48am
It is a shame that the concept of love has fallen. You capture the extent of its corruption. Very nicely done.
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1st Aug 2012 1:54am
Re. Estrogen Molotov Cocktail
25th Dec 2015 12:20pm
You caught the Schadenfreude just beautifully... and probably created a new word into the bargain: EMC
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