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Goodbye
Goodbye by gentlegirl
What is the word Goodbye
The leaving of ones place in time
The leaving of ones love
The leaving of ones mind
Tell me what is Goodbye
You seem to know it well
You're a whisper in the wind
No, you ghostly dwell
What is Goodbye to you
To quickly disappear
To run so fast with life
To be in constant fear
When does Goodbye end
Do you decide its fate
Do you allow the time
Do you leave in wait
How to say Goodbye
With emotions running high
With tears of broken heart
With no respect and no goodbye
Goodbye should be Good
Because of memories made
Because of having met
Because of Goodbye said
What is the word Goodbye
The leaving of ones place in time
The leaving of ones love
The leaving of ones mind
Tell me what is Goodbye
You seem to know it well
You're a whisper in the wind
No, you ghostly dwell
What is Goodbye to you
To quickly disappear
To run so fast with life
To be in constant fear
When does Goodbye end
Do you decide its fate
Do you allow the time
Do you leave in wait
How to say Goodbye
With emotions running high
With tears of broken heart
With no respect and no goodbye
Goodbye should be Good
Because of memories made
Because of having met
Because of Goodbye said
Published 30th Jul 2012
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30th Jul 2012 5:11pm
3rd Aug 2012 2:53pm
Thank you for reading and commenting. I am a little shy about others reading my poems, this is my first time experiencing.
3rd Aug 2012 3:44am
"Tell me what is Goodbye
You seem to know it well
You're a whisper in the wind
No, you ghostly dwell "
There's an emotional picture in these words, finely drawn.
"When does Goodbye end
Do you decide its fate
Do you allow the time
Do you leave in wait "
I like the open-ended questions; each stands alone but put together this way they have more impact.
Love this poem - doesn't matter who or why, it applies to everyone somehow.
You seem to know it well
You're a whisper in the wind
No, you ghostly dwell "
There's an emotional picture in these words, finely drawn.
"When does Goodbye end
Do you decide its fate
Do you allow the time
Do you leave in wait "
I like the open-ended questions; each stands alone but put together this way they have more impact.
Love this poem - doesn't matter who or why, it applies to everyone somehow.
3rd Aug 2012 2:55pm
Thank you so much for your comments. I love for others to enjoy something I have written. I am a bit shy sharing. Love comments.
