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Short and Sweet
Oh, she is beauty;
she is more than fair.
My mistakes only make me;
strive to be better.
She entered my heart;
at first unwanted.
Now she is my air;
she is needed.
I have to say;
I am now a cat kinda guy.
Because there is this kitty;
who to I can't say goodbye
she is more than fair.
My mistakes only make me;
strive to be better.
She entered my heart;
at first unwanted.
Now she is my air;
she is needed.
I have to say;
I am now a cat kinda guy.
Because there is this kitty;
who to I can't say goodbye
Published 24th Jul 2012
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 00:07am
Goodbye is the key sometimes. Nice job :)
25th Jul 2012 00:08am
25th Jul 2012 00:17am
Great poem. I enjoyed it quite and bit. especially this line
She entered my heart;
at first unwanted.
Now she is my air;
she is needed.
love that. Goodbye is one of the hardest things to do I think for everybody. You expressed it wonderfully I'll check out your other works.
She entered my heart;
at first unwanted.
Now she is my air;
she is needed.
love that. Goodbye is one of the hardest things to do I think for everybody. You expressed it wonderfully I'll check out your other works.
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