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Never To Have Loved At All
[font=Times New Roman]he who said,“'Tis better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all”
never lost you[/font]
I never thought I would already know someone
lying on the gravel, distraught
under the limestone
yet, there you were
with all familiarity
eager to help me climb, like last time
you taught me how it feels to be loved
selflessly; each of your kisses
glued my poisoned mosaic heart
every word you spoke
doctored my fractured archaic soul
you dangled hope in front of me
like a ball of string, teasing me to grab hold
then snatched it away
you stripped yourself from my life
leaving me with a knotted web of treasures
that flow from the faucet of my memory
now I wonder, if we really ever existed
never lost you[/font]
I never thought I would already know someone
lying on the gravel, distraught
under the limestone
yet, there you were
with all familiarity
eager to help me climb, like last time
you taught me how it feels to be loved
selflessly; each of your kisses
glued my poisoned mosaic heart
every word you spoke
doctored my fractured archaic soul
you dangled hope in front of me
like a ball of string, teasing me to grab hold
then snatched it away
you stripped yourself from my life
leaving me with a knotted web of treasures
that flow from the faucet of my memory
now I wonder, if we really ever existed
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Re: Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 8:50am
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24th Jul 2012 4:55pm
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 9:05am
I love this one Rachel...Especially the ending feeling of did we ever exist at all..it's a heavy feeling for sure and I relate..Thank's and Peace, Miki
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24th Jul 2012 4:57pm
Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 9:31am
How quickly such things are snatched away from us, that it can only ever seem like a dream.
So well penned and expressed Rachel. :)
So well penned and expressed Rachel. :)
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re: Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 4:57pm
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 2:39pm
You do exist, this poem is living readable proof Rachel!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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24th Jul 2012 4:59pm
Re: Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 2:54pm
Very deep Ms.Rachel I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to re-reading it in future thank you for sharing it with us.
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re: Re: Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 5:00pm
Thank you so much Marie. You are too kind. Thanks for the add too. It means a lot! XxXx
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24th Jul 2012 6:02pm
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24th Jul 2012 6:14pm
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24th Jul 2012 6:03pm
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24th Jul 2012 6:15pm
Well there is nothing like leaving someone speechless :)
Thanks for stopping by.
XxXx
Thanks for stopping by.
XxXx
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24th Jul 2012 6:24pm
....yeah....
but I`m tryin to write too....
....if ya keep leavin' me speechless....
I`m doomed......lmao
but I`m tryin to write too....
....if ya keep leavin' me speechless....
I`m doomed......lmao
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24th Jul 2012 6:46pm
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24th Jul 2012 6:48pm
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24th Jul 2012 7:15pm
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 8:16pm
Ratchel...
Follow these steps...
1) Stand Up
2) Raise your hands
3) With grace bow
4) reaching your hands to the ground
5) stand straight
6) Enjoy the moment
A well deserved bow... I'd say!
Follow these steps...
1) Stand Up
2) Raise your hands
3) With grace bow
4) reaching your hands to the ground
5) stand straight
6) Enjoy the moment
A well deserved bow... I'd say!
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re: Re: Never To Have Loved At All
24th Jul 2012 9:16pm
Alip!
It's been ages. So glad to see you around. :)
Ha! Sure, I'll bow for you if you'd like. :P
Thanks for reading and being so kind. :D
XxXx
It's been ages. So glad to see you around. :)
Ha! Sure, I'll bow for you if you'd like. :P
Thanks for reading and being so kind. :D
XxXx
Re: Never To Have Loved At All
25th Jul 2012 5:05am
Rachel, I really like and enjoyed this piece. Your words, phrases, and the way you carried out the whole poem is flawless. Loved it!!!
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re: Re: Never To Have Loved At All
25th Jul 2012 5:09am
Hey Jessica! It's been awhile. Good to see you around. Thank you so much for your kind words!
XxXx
XxXx
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26th Jul 2012 00:22am
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26th Jul 2012 1:03am
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26th Jul 2012 2:10am
You bet. After reading some of your poems, I think I should be calling you Doctor!
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HA! That is "Nurse" to you...I'll let it slide this time though, you're new :D
Thanks for the add!
XxXx
Thanks for the add!
XxXx
Re: Never To Have Loved At All
26th Jul 2012 10:16pm
Daaaaannnng giiirrrl, that was haunting. You wove it well, and ended it with a kick in the nuts that was tragic, and almost tender.
LOVE it.
LOVE it.
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re: Re: Never To Have Loved At All
26th Jul 2012 11:03pm
Wow, great feed back Betty. Thanks a bunch!
Truly appreciate you for stopping by and commenting. :D
XxXx
Truly appreciate you for stopping by and commenting. :D
XxXx
Re: Never To Have Loved At All
27th Jul 2012 8:25pm
Hey Rachel! You are a painter.
I like jumping around in the vault of someone who strikes me with more than a single poem. You certainly are a favorite place to enjoy my coffee in the morning.
Redundant yes, yet unless I make up new words (maybe I will), engaging and terrific will have to do.
I like jumping around in the vault of someone who strikes me with more than a single poem. You certainly are a favorite place to enjoy my coffee in the morning.
Redundant yes, yet unless I make up new words (maybe I will), engaging and terrific will have to do.
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re: Re: Never To Have Loved At All
27th Jul 2012 9:16pm
Ken, engaging and terrific are perfect.
A painter with words, very nice :)
I love having coffee with you. Such a compliment :D
Thanks for stopping by! That means a lot!
XxXx
A painter with words, very nice :)
I love having coffee with you. Such a compliment :D
Thanks for stopping by! That means a lot!
XxXx
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15th Sep 2012 4:41am
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15th Sep 2012 6:06am
Re: Never To Have Loved At All
28th Feb 2014 5:58am
Those first two stanzas are wonderfully written and then add wonderful imagery to the whole piece, really good job.
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Re: Never To Have Loved At All
18th Jun 2015 10:49pm
Stunning. So glad this was found on my recommendation list. Well done DUP, and well done you.
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