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AggressiveSignsLoveLucyLike(we Love Lucy,LIKEusnowLike 868,210)
fotobyDanKozakMalography/SatJuly21,2012a10:03am
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" Aggressive Signs176 people like this.
Hallmark Channel USA If you Love Lucy
Like we Love Lucy, LIKE us now.
Love Lucy Like we Love Lucy, LIKE us now.
Like · 868,210 people like this.Like · 868,210 people like this.
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(OR:
WHAT LUCY LEAVES BEHIND)
a likely i'mage occurs, emerges if,
if indeed, Thee Invisible can disapp
ear as per h'ow o'how can (an)
Invisible disappear?.......are
wee hear'by fckn about wit
doublenegations to aver such sillydada?
(o,dada, pleas don't!!)
like
Lucylove Lucylike I LoveLikeLucy
'' Lucy, eye'm home" & there's no
body home no home body no body
at all takes me'love like Lucy, takes
me'love waydown, (&) No
Body Is Home t'take myLove on
down but Ab'sense(of) thee disa
ppearants - Thee Invisible[s] comp
ounding wit each ray'o bright sun
light Lighting Thee Way likeLucy
liked t'Love me deep each taste(of) each
thee other's liquidsunlit Love all down
&can ye i'magine just i'magine
aggressive signs app'lied t'Our likely
Love(of)Lucy'sLove, shrunk to
but a Like[ness]? (no,no
no eye canno'even try)
thee Invisible actually having
disappeared.... no'way t'make
an account of, nor verification
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fotobyDanKozakMalography/SatJuly21,2012a10:03am
·
FreenterprizeInspirationsFrom(cyber)Space:
" Aggressive Signs176 people like this.
Hallmark Channel USA If you Love Lucy
Like we Love Lucy, LIKE us now.
Love Lucy Like we Love Lucy, LIKE us now.
Like · 868,210 people like this.Like · 868,210 people like this.
Like Aggressive Signs176 people like this.
Like Aggressive Signs176 people like this.Like "
*************************
(OR:
WHAT LUCY LEAVES BEHIND)
a likely i'mage occurs, emerges if,
if indeed, Thee Invisible can disapp
ear as per h'ow o'how can (an)
Invisible disappear?.......are
wee hear'by fckn about wit
doublenegations to aver such sillydada?
(o,dada, pleas don't!!)
like
Lucylove Lucylike I LoveLikeLucy
'' Lucy, eye'm home" & there's no
body home no home body no body
at all takes me'love like Lucy, takes
me'love waydown, (&) No
Body Is Home t'take myLove on
down but Ab'sense(of) thee disa
ppearants - Thee Invisible[s] comp
ounding wit each ray'o bright sun
light Lighting Thee Way likeLucy
liked t'Love me deep each taste(of) each
thee other's liquidsunlit Love all down
&can ye i'magine just i'magine
aggressive signs app'lied t'Our likely
Love(of)Lucy'sLove, shrunk to
but a Like[ness]? (no,no
no eye canno'even try)
thee Invisible actually having
disappeared.... no'way t'make
an account of, nor verification
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Published 21st Jul 2012
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21st Jul 2012 3:56pm
You have been getting into some good shit lately. I haven't been around long enough to leave proper comments but looked through them. I'm really liking how you've been working the found writing from your farcebook account.
More the comment and the poem becoming one has been going on. What I'm getting at is it has led you to something like this.
This is justa goddamned good piece of work. The song, the comment, the action are all interwoven first in the introduction and then in the main poem. The pacing is good. It's physical. It's rhythmic, it's metaphysical, it is present and not, it reads well on several passes. My favorite thing of yours I can recall.
More the comment and the poem becoming one has been going on. What I'm getting at is it has led you to something like this.
This is justa goddamned good piece of work. The song, the comment, the action are all interwoven first in the introduction and then in the main poem. The pacing is good. It's physical. It's rhythmic, it's metaphysical, it is present and not, it reads well on several passes. My favorite thing of yours I can recall.
21st Jul 2012 4:06pm
damn,Stevie.....toos bad The Worlde (even thee Xpansive worlduniverse of DUP) canno 'get it' thee way
you
'get it'
thank'ye wit
deep
grazies
you
'get it'
thank'ye wit
deep
grazies
21st Jul 2012 4:26pm
21st Jul 2012 4:46pm
heh i was expecting some fkedup sextrip here
"no
body home no home body no body "
sounds like a buddhist chant
"no
body home no home body no body "
sounds like a buddhist chant
21st Jul 2012 5:41pm
21st Jul 2012 10:03pm
Reminds me of listening to Lightnin' Hopkins way of doing Baby, Please Don't Go. Think it's all the homes and the deep waydowns. The way you fall onto the 'm' of the "Lucy, eye'm home" seems to stretch out the I in a great expectant way that makes the sadness even more so when there's no answer back.
I love the way you spin in and out of words.
I love the way you spin in and out of words.
22nd Jul 2012 4:49am
spin-in,spin-out...juscall me dizzy, sweetheart--
bein com'pared Lightnin Sam Hopkins is indeed grand flattery.
for one so young you are remarkably perceptive & eloquent...
always a pleasure to hear from you, dear
bein com'pared Lightnin Sam Hopkins is indeed grand flattery.
for one so young you are remarkably perceptive & eloquent...
always a pleasure to hear from you, dear
22nd Jul 2012 4:48pm
Superb musicality ringing out of this 'poem'.
The mix of the words works pretty fricking well and the concept of the invisible disappearing evokes thoughts of any tangible or intangible existence at all.
Very witty and gritty roads here, Daniel.
The mix of the words works pretty fricking well and the concept of the invisible disappearing evokes thoughts of any tangible or intangible existence at all.
Very witty and gritty roads here, Daniel.
22nd Jul 2012 6:01pm
"concept of the invisible disappearing evokes thoughts of any tangible or intangible existence at all."
yeah, mr.Alp-----much'preciate readers who read & write as ye do.
grazie
yeah, mr.Alp-----much'preciate readers who read & write as ye do.
grazie
