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At the Edge
Im at the edge and im about to fall
I just want to jump off the edge and end it all
My life is in pieces my mind is astray
Its all i can do to keep my demons at bay
I cant last much longer im barely hanging on
My happyness is now forever gone
Im afraid to die but no one can tell
What if i die and there really is a hell
Ive heard the stories but can it really be
Its just the thought of suffering forever scares the shit out of me
I just dont know how much more i can take my soul is bending and its about to break
God i need relief and i need it now
Things have to change i dont care how
I just want to jump off the edge and end it all
My life is in pieces my mind is astray
Its all i can do to keep my demons at bay
I cant last much longer im barely hanging on
My happyness is now forever gone
Im afraid to die but no one can tell
What if i die and there really is a hell
Ive heard the stories but can it really be
Its just the thought of suffering forever scares the shit out of me
I just dont know how much more i can take my soul is bending and its about to break
God i need relief and i need it now
Things have to change i dont care how
Published 18th Jul 2012
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18th Jul 2012 4:03pm
18th Jul 2012 9:32pm
19th Jul 2012 2:32am
Good poem..there are many edges we approach in life...no problem looking over..just always turn towards the next good thing ...because there are many of those as well in life...thanks for the read..Philip
19th Jul 2012 6:22am
19th Jul 2012 7:59pm
I feel u on that i no matter how much i try not to i usually end up falling off anyway
22nd Feb 2013 3:43pm
You know what you need? I think you need a cat. Or a dog. All I'm saying is that if you get either a cat or a dog, petting it has been proven to reduce both stress and blood pressure. Additionally, you'd be helping your local shelter. Not that I don't like the poem. In fact, I love it! I am just getting a gut feeling that it's more than just blowing off steam. Don't do anything you will regret--or that you won't live to regret.
