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sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 3:52pm
re: sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 5:10pm
Thanks Magda this was a test run to see if it could be done like this. I am thrilled you like it.
Re: sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 3:54pm
re: Re: sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 5:11pm
Thank you, I have many of my pieces like this mounted on to images but could not post them here. Now since discovering the possibility, I was trying it to see if it would work.
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2012 4:54pm
Well Done Gypsy Red!!!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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17th Jul 2012 5:12pm
Re: sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 8:28pm
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17th Jul 2012 8:57pm
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2012 10:13pm
Marie
1. Femininity is a hard word to spell
2. Use smaller 777x777 backgrounds - when I used 999 x999 - you can see on my experiments with this...they were a bit too large
3. underneath in the first comment space
cut and past the original poem
You have done a really good job - and the background is good because of the strong colour. The poem is good....but you write well
It is not easy to read....so this is not meant as a criticism - it is just what I learned when I did 2 or 3 of these.
Peace
Kitty
1. Femininity is a hard word to spell
2. Use smaller 777x777 backgrounds - when I used 999 x999 - you can see on my experiments with this...they were a bit too large
3. underneath in the first comment space
cut and past the original poem
You have done a really good job - and the background is good because of the strong colour. The poem is good....but you write well
It is not easy to read....so this is not meant as a criticism - it is just what I learned when I did 2 or 3 of these.
Peace
Kitty
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17th Jul 2012 10:16pm
Re: sublime femeninity
17th Jul 2012 11:22pm
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17th Jul 2012 11:31pm
Re: sublime femeninity
19th Jul 2012 1:17pm
"But a smart man knows a rock is so much more." Yes. Yes. A rock has a softness when picked up, it has a smoothness when touched, it has a gentleness when view with other rocks, etc. Well developed and flowing poem. You use the "almost warrior strength" of woman a few too many times,("she is strong and fierce" kind of thing) in my opinion, but only a minor reality for me. Wonderful job.
marcella1
marcella1
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23rd Jul 2012 6:39pm
Thank you for the insightful comment and for stopping by to read my piece.
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21st Jul 2012 10:01pm
Very nice artwork and writing , it is a touch hard to read ...but overall great work..Tim
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22nd Jul 2012 1:25am
Thank you very much , yes, I have been trying to make it easier to read but the colors were not cooperating so I changed them, let me know what you think.