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Just kids
We were just kids
we still are
we have plans to marry and grow old together
but how will this work isnt it just a crazy plan
how can i feel so much when i barely no emotions at all
i have a feeling this fantasy will blow up in my face
that there will be only pain and hurt
that what love we say we feel will grow cold and shatter into a million tears
that forever may not be that long
maybe some things we are not meant to understand
we still are
we have plans to marry and grow old together
but how will this work isnt it just a crazy plan
how can i feel so much when i barely no emotions at all
i have a feeling this fantasy will blow up in my face
that there will be only pain and hurt
that what love we say we feel will grow cold and shatter into a million tears
that forever may not be that long
maybe some things we are not meant to understand
Published 16th Jul 2012
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16th Jul 2012 10:49pm
So true, in the naivety of our youth when we feel so much and yet still have much to learn. We feel love and believe we've found eternity unaware we're quite simply balancing on the tip of life's iceberg.
10th Aug 2012 00:55am
amazing baby i love it nd yes we may just be kids but our love is true we will make it forever u r always in my heart lynette ur boo now nd forever even after i draw my final breath te amo hope i can see u so te amo
5th Sep 2012 9:02pm
thank you corey i miss you my life isnt making sense anymore i really want to be in your arms again and for everything to be normal well as normal as possible
