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Haiku - Wish

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Made into the night, �
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whispers, to the stars appeal, �
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twinkles signal yes. �
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Written by marielavoue

(Gypsy Red)

Published 14th Jul 2012

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Haiku - Wish

Magdalena (Spartalena)

14th Jul 2012 9:57am

A beautiful wish Gypsy.

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

14th Jul 2012 12:28pm

Thank you Magda you are very kind.

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Re: Haiku - Wish

Anonymous

14th Jul 2012 10:56am

Sirius is my beacon.

I like these poems Red Gypsy.

Strider :)

marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

14th Jul 2012 12:30pm

lolol I knew you would strider, If nobody else likes them, you would.Thanks

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Re: Haiku - Wish

Soul_Man_Ken

14th Jul 2012 11:05am

So lovely!

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

14th Jul 2012 12:30pm

So sweet of ya... lolol

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harlequin

14th Jul 2012 11:12am

Agree with all the above ... good stuff

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

14th Jul 2012 12:31pm

Glad you enjoyed it Luv, thanks for the comment.

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Re: Haiku - Wish

Anonymous

14th Jul 2012 3:21pm

This is an oasis of beauty
a sanctuary of verse
thank you for sharing

marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

14th Jul 2012 4:05pm

I am so happy you enjoyed it, thank you for the gracious comment.

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runningturtle87

15th Jul 2012 1:41pm

Sinking directly
into a single star
those billions
of miles away-
here

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

15th Jul 2012 3:41pm

nice, thanks RT87 for stopping by dropping some lines on us;)))

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