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seeing my mom's underpants
i asked if she was hurt
no, boy
i just do that
it's ok
my first sister
was frightened
when she bled
the second
wrote her name
on the mirror
used my towel
teenage in high school
no contraceptives
waiting for the first blood
the starting flag
a few days
to do it like adults
so horny
we forget the tampon
ouch
now you pushed the string
up somewhere
gotta find it
damn string
and the sheets
my mom really
must have suspected something
her son doing laundry at 3am
hydrogen peroxide works great
and always use cold water
and sometimes give up and
buy new sheets
but what about the mattress?
jeez
after all this
it still took years of marriage
to confidently walk
into the supermarket
and distinguish scented(never)
from unscented
to grab the right ones
light flow
light-to-medium flow
medium flow
medium-to-heavy flow
heavy flow the rivers of blood
blood to wash us with new life
blood to wash us clean
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seeing my mom's underpants
i asked if she was hurt
no, boy
i just do that
it's ok
my first sister
was frightened
when she bled
the second
wrote her name
on the mirror
used my towel
teenage in high school
no contraceptives
waiting for the first blood
the starting flag
a few days
to do it like adults
so horny
we forget the tampon
ouch
now you pushed the string
up somewhere
gotta find it
damn string
and the sheets
my mom really
must have suspected something
her son doing laundry at 3am
hydrogen peroxide works great
and always use cold water
and sometimes give up and
buy new sheets
but what about the mattress?
jeez
after all this
it still took years of marriage
to confidently walk
into the supermarket
and distinguish scented(never)
from unscented
to grab the right ones
light flow
light-to-medium flow
medium flow
medium-to-heavy flow
heavy flow the rivers of blood
blood to wash us with new life
blood to wash us clean
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Re: < flow >
13th Jul 2012 12:37pm
That last group of words was an astounding summary and glassy philosophy.
Wrote her name on the mirror? Why not.
Wrote her name on the mirror? Why not.
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re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 2:25am
Re: < flow >
Anonymous
13th Jul 2012 2:18pm
coming from a male this is a wonderful and funny view of monthly miseries.....and the image is great.....nice to have your point of view....

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re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 2:28am
Happy to provide point of view,
especially the one coming from outside.
Menstruation disproves 'intelligent design'.
especially the one coming from outside.
Menstruation disproves 'intelligent design'.
Re: < flow >
13th Jul 2012 3:46pm
I have been the go to guy in so many occassions and for so many reasons that all of this made perfectly good sense to me.....and then there is the no tampon days with just toilet paper or nothing
Or this.....
Waddling down
the shoreline
she looked like
a pimento
in an olive.
Or this.....
Waddling down
the shoreline
she looked like
a pimento
in an olive.
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re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 2:30am
Re: < flow >
13th Jul 2012 5:37pm
wonderful....
almost paradoxymoronian*
*though a thing most normative humanbeans would de'stain aspirations to, it is meant here in as certainly complimentary
almost paradoxymoronian*
*though a thing most normative humanbeans would de'stain aspirations to, it is meant here in as certainly complimentary
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re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 2:31am
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14th Jul 2012 5:21am
at 1st glance, "clad" looked like "dad" & eye spontaneous burst out DADA !!
then i saw it to be "clad", &at 1st th'ought 'whathfck's that sposed2mean?'
then, & only then, It occurred unto me....
CLA'DADA !
then i saw it to be "clad", &at 1st th'ought 'whathfck's that sposed2mean?'
then, & only then, It occurred unto me....
CLA'DADA !
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re: re: re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 10:12am
DADA this, DADA that, pretty soon it starts
making sense which means, of course, it's
time to clad oneself in different mantle:
chlamydada.
making sense which means, of course, it's
time to clad oneself in different mantle:
chlamydada.
re: re: re: re: Re: < flow >
14th Jul 2012 2:43pm
& a little
haHa
throed in
fgood mea
sure......
waitaminute. strike that from th'record. this Poetry thing is a true-serious
e
go
i
ssue
(competition, any1?)....must put
haha
way away, lest Be a loser
haHa
throed in
fgood mea
sure......
waitaminute. strike that from th'record. this Poetry thing is a true-serious
e
go
i
ssue
(competition, any1?)....must put
haha
way away, lest Be a loser
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16th Jul 2012 12:18pm
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16th Jul 2012 8:11pm
ha
not'cording to DUP stats....as Casey said: "Ykin look-it-up"
i gots more pooms posted than 'comments' made, (& 1/2 them comments is my responses...ha)
my ratio of 'reads' to 'comments' is off the low-end of the chart.
these DUPers donknow 'what' t'make of whatever is left-of-'me'.......but
thank g'odd for the precious few of You who Do communicate wit me bout my rites...
blessed be, sir Lemmy
not'cording to DUP stats....as Casey said: "Ykin look-it-up"
i gots more pooms posted than 'comments' made, (& 1/2 them comments is my responses...ha)
my ratio of 'reads' to 'comments' is off the low-end of the chart.
these DUPers donknow 'what' t'make of whatever is left-of-'me'.......but
thank g'odd for the precious few of You who Do communicate wit me bout my rites...
blessed be, sir Lemmy
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Re: < flow >
16th Jul 2012 7:28am
Pick me some up on your way home, Dad, my reading list is going through "the change" and it's a doozy.
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re: Re: < flow >
16th Jul 2012 12:18pm
Re: < flow >
17th Jul 2012 12:39pm
RAY.
well, i was kind of afraid at the start of the poem that it was going to be nasty.
I found it quite humorous though with no real gag effect going on.
I mean you know you got wordsmith going on when you can take a subject any subject with the potential of the above and turn it into something as readable and enjoyable as you have.
I take your hat off to you.
P.s I got a job in a tampax factory once. mate of mine pulled a few strings for me.
well, i was kind of afraid at the start of the poem that it was going to be nasty.
I found it quite humorous though with no real gag effect going on.
I mean you know you got wordsmith going on when you can take a subject any subject with the potential of the above and turn it into something as readable and enjoyable as you have.
I take your hat off to you.
P.s I got a job in a tampax factory once. mate of mine pulled a few strings for me.
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re: Re: < flow >
18th Jul 2012 10:30am
Three tampax walked into a bar.
The bartender looked up and said:
"I think you're in the wrong joke."
The bartender looked up and said:
"I think you're in the wrong joke."
Re: < flow >
20th Jul 2012 00:17am
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21st Jul 2012 11:25am