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I die slowly with out you
I fall on my sword as my love cause you to much pain
I die slowly with out you
I am reborn with you not there
You call me and raise me from the blade
Only to drop me back on to it
I die slowly with out you
I am reborn with you not there
You call me and raise me from the blade
Only to drop me back on to it
Published 10th Jul 2012
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11th Jul 2012 5:22am
I can relate to such a love; the act of loving can be an act of a slow death repeated each time love is reborn. Love is truly for the warrior and not the faint of heart.
14th Jul 2012 9:47pm
Thank you for the feedback, the poem is about losing someone, they contact you again, only to go again.
11th Jul 2012 10:53pm
14th Jul 2012 9:49pm
I think at some point in every one’s life this has happened, but there is someone new out there for everyone :o)
