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my prayer
i believe in God and i pray a lot.
but how come i get punished
more than the people that i know
who haven't been to church
a day in their life,
but their lives are perfect.
Well after i thought about it...
their lives aren't that great.
they smoke, drink, do drugs, cuss
and where does that get them?
running from the police
and maybe a few people thinking they are cool.
REAL EXCITING!
well here is my prayer:
i pray all those people
whose lives suck,
will meet God, just like me.
i pray they will pray.
and i pray God will
help them turn their lives around
and make their lives suck a little less.
AMEN
but how come i get punished
more than the people that i know
who haven't been to church
a day in their life,
but their lives are perfect.
Well after i thought about it...
their lives aren't that great.
they smoke, drink, do drugs, cuss
and where does that get them?
running from the police
and maybe a few people thinking they are cool.
REAL EXCITING!
well here is my prayer:
i pray all those people
whose lives suck,
will meet God, just like me.
i pray they will pray.
and i pray God will
help them turn their lives around
and make their lives suck a little less.
AMEN
Published 24th Mar 2010
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25th Mar 2010 5:44pm
You tried to get me to god once. Ended up just making me more doubtful of his existence. I wouldnt pray for me. Your probably not anyway.
Anonymous
28th Mar 2010 10:13pm
I'm no believer
30th Nov 2012 4:06pm
I go to church every Sunday.nhowever this did not seem like a poem, this seemed as just a way for you to push your elision o. Others. You did not have one steady topic. Was it about having a bad life? Or was it about hoping others will believe? Was it just a way for you to let off steam?
