Cold

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"Each gash bleeds blue" - no oxygen, hasn't gotten through your heart yet. or has, but it needs to be oxygenated again to be any use, to bring any life. that is extremely interesting and poignant to your poem, fishy. maybe you'd consider expanding on it. i would love to hear more of your medical knowledge come out in your writing... you could apply it to so many things!

but yeah... i hate the numbness. x

Thank you jestafishy. I will take your suggestion and use it a little bit more. Seems that's what I know best, Ty again

even tho we still breathe i feel cold and dead.. this poem can exactly describe how i feel often.. even tho its short but has alot of meaning then most realize

Yes If you look deep it has about three meanings. Thanks for the comment :-)

you  framed  it  well  conratulations  gigi

Thanks jaito

Now I know what to feel like when I am dead:( not fun.  

On a livelier note, your flow was spot-on and well versed. . .loved it!

Thank you love

You scribe the hum of numb very well.

I like popsicles :)

Me to . I was actually eating one The moment I wrote this :-)

This is deep Gg feeling numb and cold is a feeling I can relate to..bravo peace Crim :)

Thanks crIm