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Singularism II- One is All, All is One
Noon glow slipping
through tall trees
blurring scenery
introduce aura
to every in ambiance
as if waterpaint in musing
edges blend
omnipotent anti-aliasing
left no distinct
hue contrast fluctuate
bloom zoom spume boom
Rupture into nebular
delicate molecules
dance a genre
of holistic spiritual
reconstruct itself
into rainbow ocean
riding on waves
circle round cosmic gala
planets in resonance
sings Bach's Minuet in G major
bathing in cosmogonic orgy
ego baptism
croon tune swoon boom
Fall
into the crackling crisp
of fallen leaves
Bliss
through tall trees
blurring scenery
introduce aura
to every in ambiance
as if waterpaint in musing
edges blend
omnipotent anti-aliasing
left no distinct
hue contrast fluctuate
bloom zoom spume boom
Rupture into nebular
delicate molecules
dance a genre
of holistic spiritual
reconstruct itself
into rainbow ocean
riding on waves
circle round cosmic gala
planets in resonance
sings Bach's Minuet in G major
bathing in cosmogonic orgy
ego baptism
croon tune swoon boom
Fall
into the crackling crisp
of fallen leaves
Bliss
Published 29th Jun 2012
| Edited 30th Jun 2012
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29th Jun 2012 10:54am
Pluralism I can't be far ahead/behind.
Seriously melodic / like muchly.
Über-übermensch PlusplusRay
Seriously melodic / like muchly.
Über-übermensch PlusplusRay
29th Jun 2012 11:26am
Anonymous
29th Jun 2012 2:36pm
This is excellent in every way.
A very enjoyable read.
You have the WOW factor in poetry
Peace
Kitty
A very enjoyable read.
You have the WOW factor in poetry
Peace
Kitty
29th Jun 2012 9:06pm
29th Jun 2012 3:23pm
veryvery topnotchety....
maybe my fav nakSat poom yet
y're
learning
well
(what,
i'dunno...butt keep at it)
maybe my fav nakSat poom yet
y're
learning
well
(what,
i'dunno...butt keep at it)
29th Jun 2012 9:08pm
2nd Jul 2012 6:33pm
Fred
first stop. really.
few things from the heart of a seeker.
1. you are evidently a seeker and have
a unique voice. that is a blessing and
a curse. lonely is the path and hard
is the journey. life or poetry.
2. you have decided. stayed. unwavering.
the fight will continue and more such
will pour. make them and you will.
3. you have dabbled with post ww ii
french intellect brouhaha which shook
the world then. and you have dabbled
well.[ i can tell though i have not touched
even a single page of that mine of gunpowder]
what i like is you have wrung the essence out
of it dank it and now you are micturating it
with the innocence of a child and the awareness
of a wizened old soul. is not that great now.
one suggestion: find a translation of the upanishads. all of them. find a seminal thesis
and read a few books about the philosophy. kierkegaard and nietzsche started their thinking there. never chase the hero, find the school.:)
now about your writing. not mainstream, never was. not everyone's cup of tea. and those who can take it will mix some whiskey in this tea.
wordplay is like a promising sorcerer. vocabulary says it all. signature and its a good one.
this poem can be your identity. and for any poet that is again a good/bad thing. i could tell you about your life [not boasting, just expressing] from this one poem. and yet this is not confessional. this is high end laser show and is bound the dazzle the blind. but then the message in it is just a line, aint that true brother?:)
this is not a critique. this is my first impression. and impressions originate in the soul[i know you think its ambiguous, just saying]
so what are you waiting for..shake your head, smile and micturate some more. relief.:)
warm regards
sumeet
first stop. really.
few things from the heart of a seeker.
1. you are evidently a seeker and have
a unique voice. that is a blessing and
a curse. lonely is the path and hard
is the journey. life or poetry.
2. you have decided. stayed. unwavering.
the fight will continue and more such
will pour. make them and you will.
3. you have dabbled with post ww ii
french intellect brouhaha which shook
the world then. and you have dabbled
well.[ i can tell though i have not touched
even a single page of that mine of gunpowder]
what i like is you have wrung the essence out
of it dank it and now you are micturating it
with the innocence of a child and the awareness
of a wizened old soul. is not that great now.
one suggestion: find a translation of the upanishads. all of them. find a seminal thesis
and read a few books about the philosophy. kierkegaard and nietzsche started their thinking there. never chase the hero, find the school.:)
now about your writing. not mainstream, never was. not everyone's cup of tea. and those who can take it will mix some whiskey in this tea.
wordplay is like a promising sorcerer. vocabulary says it all. signature and its a good one.
this poem can be your identity. and for any poet that is again a good/bad thing. i could tell you about your life [not boasting, just expressing] from this one poem. and yet this is not confessional. this is high end laser show and is bound the dazzle the blind. but then the message in it is just a line, aint that true brother?:)
this is not a critique. this is my first impression. and impressions originate in the soul[i know you think its ambiguous, just saying]
so what are you waiting for..shake your head, smile and micturate some more. relief.:)
warm regards
sumeet
Damn you drop a poem on my page, not cool bro! just kidding.
1. hmmm kinda true, however who doesn't have the "seeker" trait and i kinda came to conclusion, am i still a seeker?
2. true, I'm a nonconformist.
3. haha incorrect, I have never read any philosophical books and this is not inspired by any post ww ii french. I'm more of a visual/audio guy, thats where i get my inspiration from.
Upanishads sounds cool, a documentary definitely exist and I'll check it out.
And yes, the message is just a line though the journey to realisation- I hope is more than just one line for the viewers, good or bad for beholders to decide.
AYE MICTURATE SOME MORE, IT IS THEN!
Honored to have you drop by, hope to see more of you! :)
1. hmmm kinda true, however who doesn't have the "seeker" trait and i kinda came to conclusion, am i still a seeker?
2. true, I'm a nonconformist.
3. haha incorrect, I have never read any philosophical books and this is not inspired by any post ww ii french. I'm more of a visual/audio guy, thats where i get my inspiration from.
Upanishads sounds cool, a documentary definitely exist and I'll check it out.
And yes, the message is just a line though the journey to realisation- I hope is more than just one line for the viewers, good or bad for beholders to decide.
AYE MICTURATE SOME MORE, IT IS THEN!
Honored to have you drop by, hope to see more of you! :)
2nd Jul 2012 8:30pm
3. was not exactly a surprise. long hours on the internet and reference. audio/visual together is a huge medium and i am glad you have chosen to explore it. we should talk more imo. in due time, i say.
2nd Jul 2012 8:46pm
indeed, and yes definitely in for more intellectual conversation! in due time
