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Wanna
Wanna push my cock
right up inside you
and thrust deep
faster than
a locomotive
until my balls jiggle
and bounce
on your soft pussy hair
Wanna hear you moan
until the rumble
in your throat turns
to a roar
Wanna watch your
nipples stand out
until they look like
they're gonna burst
Wanna see the fine skin
on your breasts and neck
covered in that pink flush
that spreads all over
Wanna suck your ears
your tongue
your clit
slap your arse and lick
Wanna come
everywhere
Wanna film all your
multiple orgasms
close up
then play them back
on a big screen at my mate's
stag night...
though that might be
a bit too far
on our first date--
so I'll settle for a kiss
right up inside you
and thrust deep
faster than
a locomotive
until my balls jiggle
and bounce
on your soft pussy hair
Wanna hear you moan
until the rumble
in your throat turns
to a roar
Wanna watch your
nipples stand out
until they look like
they're gonna burst
Wanna see the fine skin
on your breasts and neck
covered in that pink flush
that spreads all over
Wanna suck your ears
your tongue
your clit
slap your arse and lick
Wanna come
everywhere
Wanna film all your
multiple orgasms
close up
then play them back
on a big screen at my mate's
stag night...
though that might be
a bit too far
on our first date--
so I'll settle for a kiss
Published 15th Mar 2010
| Edited 14th Jul 2012
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2010 3:10pm
wiley Abra always laying traps for the reader:-)Very strong erotic poem, the final twist, twists my head!
15th Mar 2010 4:29pm
Twisted heads - now there's a thing. I never thought about that. Appreciate your kind feedback, Priya.
Anonymous
15th Mar 2010 4:45pm
lol---You make me laugh!!!
Anonymous
16th Mar 2010 1:53am
and hilarious, a difficult combination indeed. I must admit I was surprised to see an 'extreme content' warning on one of your poems, but this is a worthy little piece of erotic verse. Sensual and witty, vulgar and poetic.
16th Mar 2010 7:10am
Nothing surprises me, Jack - even the creepy and hilarious combination doesn't boggle my mind these days. I have done extreme before, but always think it's like restricting your audience - a bit like a tourniquet around the willy! Appreciate your kind thoughts.
Anonymous
16th Mar 2010 9:48am
Didn't really need that tourniquet image, if I'm honest, and I genuinely feel for any paramedic whose had you in the back of their ambulance...
16th Mar 2010 12:03pm
Now, now, prude doesn't suit you, Jack - and ambulances don't suit me either.
Anonymous
17th Mar 2010 1:55pm
Really? I thought prude suited me down to the ground...
17th Mar 2010 3:13pm
You can always have the best of both worlds - however, I have always considered grounding yourself on all fours a matter of personal choice.
Anonymous
16th Mar 2010 1:21pm
I wanna be yr dog, A.
Great little piece, harsh and full of disjointed humour. Sex is funny.
Great little piece, harsh and full of disjointed humour. Sex is funny.
