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The Beast In Me
Trying to find a place
to rest my weary soul
I feel broken like i'm walking on glass
My mind speeding through
this thing we call life
dizzying thoughts collide in my head
I tell myself breathe slow it down babe
but the powers that be suffocate me
with their mind bending visions
Demons lead me astray
voices that screech in the night
whispers I hear by day
To quiet my mind
sigh to quiet my mind
running to and froe through the streets
Seeking ever seeking
some peace of mind
to take me out of myself
Some hiding place
where I can retreat
turn a blind eye for awhile to the beast hiding in me
to rest my weary soul
I feel broken like i'm walking on glass
My mind speeding through
this thing we call life
dizzying thoughts collide in my head
I tell myself breathe slow it down babe
but the powers that be suffocate me
with their mind bending visions
Demons lead me astray
voices that screech in the night
whispers I hear by day
To quiet my mind
sigh to quiet my mind
running to and froe through the streets
Seeking ever seeking
some peace of mind
to take me out of myself
Some hiding place
where I can retreat
turn a blind eye for awhile to the beast hiding in me
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Re: The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 00:18am
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26th Jun 2012 00:36am
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26th Jun 2012 00:36am
Re: The Beast In Me
It makes me think of how I feel when I am trying to go to sleep. I can't quiet my mind.
Powerful write Crim :)
Powerful write Crim :)
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26th Jun 2012 6:35pm
Re: The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 2:07am
Crim My Lovely lady this is powerful....
your energy in this piece builds like the buzz
of a bee hive... love it!
your energy in this piece builds like the buzz
of a bee hive... love it!
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26th Jun 2012 6:35pm
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26th Jun 2012 6:37pm
Re: The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 5:14am
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26th Jun 2012 6:37pm
The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 7:14am
To quiet my mind, I take it to another place, I've been doing it so long now that I have come to master it.
I hope you find your escape Crim. Great expression and pen as always. :)
I hope you find your escape Crim. Great expression and pen as always. :)
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re: The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 6:39pm
I will have to try and master it through meditation as well..ty for your helpful comment Magdalena..peace Crim
Re: The Beast In Me
26th Jun 2012 1:57pm
We all have a beast that hides within us just waiting for the moment to bust forth. Excellent work sweet crim.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
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26th Jun 2012 6:39pm
Re: The Beast In Me
27th Jun 2012 3:15am
You know I love you.
I am feeling the same way. Thanks for describing what I couldn't.
Shine on baby girl.
I am feeling the same way. Thanks for describing what I couldn't.
Shine on baby girl.
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27th Jun 2012 6:22pm