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Dreaming
I sit Gazing out the window at the tall sunflowers
Their bright heads swaying to and fro
With the soft breeze that's blowing
While The sun catches my diamond bracelet
Casting rainbows of sparkling color
Dancing around every reflective surface
Mirroring mirrors
I'll sit Waiting for the sun to dip over the horizon
To bring out the night sky
Millions of tiny stars will wink at me.
As i sit Hugging myself
Dreaming of another place and time.
Thank you eammon for helping with this one.
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Re: Dreaming
13th Jun 2012 8:38pm
Beautiful. Can we sit there together? I need the solace of such a solitary place.
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re: Re: Dreaming
13th Jun 2012 8:43pm
Sure come on up to mass. I have a huge bay window. Near my tv with a huge sectional couch :-) you'd love it.. Lol thanks music. But eammon did steer me right on this one
Re: Dreaming
13th Jun 2012 8:48pm
I love this poem!
Anonymous
13th Jun 2012 11:27pm
I definitely need to move to Mass! Here all I got (looking out my window) is a nasty-ass neighbor with a dozen cats; a house that is "supposedly haunted"; and an empty lot staring right back at me. Can I come over BFF, and watch those sunflowers with you instead of the tumbleweeds, please???
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Re: Dreaming
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14th Jun 2012 2:16am
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14th Jun 2012 2:27am
Re: Dreaming
14th Jun 2012 4:56pm
Gigi.
Hey, you done good with this.
Thanks for the credits. you should be crediting yourself for stepping outside your comfort zone and writing the bulk of this sweet little poem on your own.
very impressive and I hope you realize what you can do if you feel like it.
shine on Gigi!
I can see the logic in Christians thinking.
Hey, you done good with this.
Thanks for the credits. you should be crediting yourself for stepping outside your comfort zone and writing the bulk of this sweet little poem on your own.
very impressive and I hope you realize what you can do if you feel like it.
shine on Gigi!
I can see the logic in Christians thinking.
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re: Re: Dreaming
14th Jun 2012 5:09pm
Yeah me to. But I hate to change things once I've set it to my liking. But I will try to get out of my comfort zone and expand my mind to change
Thanks again
Thanks again
Re: Dreaming
15th Jun 2012 7:37pm
this is beautiful and serene Gg calming my frayed nerves..you took me to a lovely place ty..peace Crim :)
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17th Jun 2012 8:09am
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Re: Dreaming
18th Jun 2012 00:47am
sweet'n'cool as summer'eve breeze..just th'rite touch'o melancholia
write on, dear Gigi
write on, dear Gigi
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