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The man in striped gloves
The man in striped gloves,
He used to be so happy,
His heart was warm,
And his words were sappy.
Now his heart is broken,
And his smile is hollow,
The pain he feels,
He cannot swollow.
He's now lost,
In a world he doesn't belong,
He grows tired,
Of everyone asking whats wrong.
He loves one,
But she doesn't care,
He doubts she notices,
When he isn't there.
He's suposed to save her,
He needs to be saved too,
Will anyone help him,
Will it be you?
The man in striped gloves,
His heart breaks everyday,
All because of her,
There's nothing more to say.
He used to be so happy,
His heart was warm,
And his words were sappy.
Now his heart is broken,
And his smile is hollow,
The pain he feels,
He cannot swollow.
He's now lost,
In a world he doesn't belong,
He grows tired,
Of everyone asking whats wrong.
He loves one,
But she doesn't care,
He doubts she notices,
When he isn't there.
He's suposed to save her,
He needs to be saved too,
Will anyone help him,
Will it be you?
The man in striped gloves,
His heart breaks everyday,
All because of her,
There's nothing more to say.
Published 7th Jun 2012
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3rd Feb 2015 11:07pm
Soft and full of emotional tone... No need for punctuation in a shortened format! Also; and, but & that are Never in Cap's Some reaching and the tempo fell off towards the end. keep grindin
