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THE BOY FROM NEXT STREET
You the perfect mother of two...
A busy homemaker with plenty to do..
Yet your mind at times goes astray
To let dark desires come to play...
The veneer of grace is gently peeled
As the toxic thoughts are slowly revealed
Images of your lover wrestling in bed
If you are caught, you will be dead...
yet nothing to fear in this secret night
With the body on fire and passion burning bright
Can now see the two shadows dance in the dark room
Is it your secret lover, who will bring you doom?
Yes, he is the young boy from the corner street
When your husband is away, you two do meet
Why do you play with his body and soul
Pray, reveal your ultimate goal
I need an identity other than just a wife
He is the one who gives me the zing of my life...
So that passion in life is never amiss
I will always pine for his sinful kiss
A busy homemaker with plenty to do..
Yet your mind at times goes astray
To let dark desires come to play...
The veneer of grace is gently peeled
As the toxic thoughts are slowly revealed
Images of your lover wrestling in bed
If you are caught, you will be dead...
yet nothing to fear in this secret night
With the body on fire and passion burning bright
Can now see the two shadows dance in the dark room
Is it your secret lover, who will bring you doom?
Yes, he is the young boy from the corner street
When your husband is away, you two do meet
Why do you play with his body and soul
Pray, reveal your ultimate goal
I need an identity other than just a wife
He is the one who gives me the zing of my life...
So that passion in life is never amiss
I will always pine for his sinful kiss
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5th Jun 2012 7:31am
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7th Jun 2012 5:56am
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jun 2012 5:21pm
7th Jun 2012 5:17pm
Hi! Welcome to DUP. This is a great write. Way to start out for sure. :)
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8th Jun 2012 6:22am
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6th Jul 2012 1:50pm
I will always pine for his sinful kiss
6th Jul 2012 3:56pm
The flow is great. For me this has an underlining foreboding feeling sort of melancholic but still its very steamy;forbidden love always has a certain allure to it
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re: I will always pine for his sinful kiss
7th Jul 2012 5:36am
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10th Jul 2012 5:54pm
I'm loving your style of writing, your words lift the reader out of their shoes and places them into yours. Such passion nd depth behind the words, you portray the subject flawlessly
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23rd Sep 2012 4:34pm
wow. That's a great piece of work. I like the way you mixed the two feelings - lust and sinfulness.
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23rd Sep 2012 4:43pm
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2012 3:47pm
Great flow, enjoyed
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29th Sep 2012 3:48pm
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30th Sep 2012 6:54pm
This really brings out the tension that two lovers have when they are together!
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5th Oct 2012 7:41am
Heartskippingly wonderful.... a joy to read, reminds me of Mrs Robinson from The Graduate ...tyvm
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5th Oct 2012 9:05am
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11th Oct 2012 12:55pm
Great work, good rythem in your words a poem that the reader can relate to as well!
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13th Nov 2012 4:34am
Enjoyed reading this piece! Loved "the veneer of grace is gently peeled/as the toxic thoughts are slowly revealed"
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10th Jan 2013 1:04pm
A careful and rhythmic work, but I can't understand why you have which from third to first person at the end. Must be one of my thick days.
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
13th Jan 2013 11:31am
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22nd Feb 2013 2:27pm
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20th Apr 2013 12:08pm
I need an identity other than just a wife ..This line sums it up for many..Good write
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27th Apr 2013 7:07pm
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2nd May 2013 3:55pm
my heart!! my heart!!!
your killing me so softly with this poem,....
Damn!!!!!!
so sexy
omg!!!
i think im inlove with your pen.
your killing me so softly with this poem,....
Damn!!!!!!
so sexy
omg!!!
i think im inlove with your pen.
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31st Aug 2013 3:05pm
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23rd Sep 2013 4:56pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 5:03pm
WOW <3 Sexy and beautifully written :D
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19th Feb 2015 1:18am
the boy from next street got his hands to deep
the husband came home to sneak a peek
pulled out his shot gun and sent the boy back to his street, crying for his mamma with his dirty bare feet
the husband came home to sneak a peek
pulled out his shot gun and sent the boy back to his street, crying for his mamma with his dirty bare feet
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15th Jul 2015 10:14am
You got the females need to escape from her domestic goddess role down, cool poem, seductive. 💋
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10th Dec 2018 5:30am
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20th Dec 2018 6:33am
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Oct 2022 6:45pm
30th Mar 2019 2:43am
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