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Heaven And Hell
An angel's eyes,
a devil's grin.
A heavenly body,
full of sin.
An innocent touch,
with devilish pleasures.
Once caught in her spell,
you're tangled forever.
She'll make you beg,
with flames of desire.
Burning you with lust,
that's hotter than fire.
A sexy addiction,
that lures you in.
An erotic game,
you just can't win!
Published 29th May 2012
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Anonymous
29th May 2012 10:04pm
I really like this. And the flow. . .can't ask for more than that. Great job;)
29th May 2012 10:37pm
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Anonymous
30th May 2012 9:17pm
t3arzOfdiamondz,
Welcome to DU. I know, it's the ones I haven't a chance of winning that always do me in ; ) Great flow on this one! Enjoyed.
tornado
Welcome to DU. I know, it's the ones I haven't a chance of winning that always do me in ; ) Great flow on this one! Enjoyed.
tornado
30th May 2012 11:23pm
1st Jun 2012 8:05am
...... i thoroughly enjoy this style ... similar to my own ..... i will be looking for more of yours ;)
1st Jun 2012 12:34pm
