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The Wrinkles of Time

 
Like a star from the past she regaled us with stories
A lesson in each and every one of them
With love and patience she guided us
Even when we didn’t want to listen or understand

But after so many laps around the sun
I began to appreciate more of what she done
For all the sacrifices she made
All the sufferings she must’ve endured
I saw more of her light

Now at ninety-five
She only whispers
A fog has come over memory
Hands that once worked so hard
Show the wrinkles of time

Her faces lights up
Like a beacon of hope
Like a fire of inspiration
Knowing that our time now is more precious

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Written by wallyroo92
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Author's Note
For Journey to the Stars, NaPoWriMo'25 Stomp the Prompt Comp, prompt # 5
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