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Last night at a party somewhere
These guys were beer-bonging at a party last night
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 5 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 5 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
Published 29th Mar 2025
Author's Note
Don't try this at home. Stealing skateboards, that is.
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29th Mar 2025 3:51pm
wow that's crazy I saw some drink bleach once but he was crazy and nobody could stop him before it was too late great write ❤️
29th Mar 2025 3:54pm
29th Mar 2025 4:08pm
That is an extreme retaliation for a skateboarded. Damn
Nicely done straight to the point
Nicely done straight to the point
29th Mar 2025 6:12pm
30th Mar 2025 5:39am
Damn, revenge is a drink best served cold? Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
30th Mar 2025 11:21am
