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leave
unpack yourself from my broken edges
take everythin you can gather
your heart is too gentle
too patient for the wreckage of me
I want you to see me
truly see how damaged
how unworthy of your soft mornins
how undeservin of your careful love
walk away
before I destroy us both
with the quiet violence
of my unravelin
take everythin you can gather
your heart is too gentle
too patient for the wreckage of me
I want you to see me
truly see how damaged
how unworthy of your soft mornins
how undeservin of your careful love
walk away
before I destroy us both
with the quiet violence
of my unravelin
Published 26th Mar 2025
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26th Mar 2025 3:33am
Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Into the list it belongs! Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
26th Mar 2025 3:36am
29th Mar 2025 1:22pm
Sometimes it's hard to see anything but our jagged edges & the damage they'll do to those who stick around. Ya just wanna warn them off before they end up bleeding...adding another sharp edge to the totality of our fractures. It's so complicated
