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Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
You
The blanket of stars
Born into existence
To protect my sensibilities
My caged heart
My lonely soul
I wished upon
The ancient memory
Of you
And found love
The blanket of stars
Born into existence
To protect my sensibilities
My caged heart
My lonely soul
I wished upon
The ancient memory
Of you
And found love
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Copyright @Her 2024. All rights reserve.
Love is my downfall and the reason I get up in the morning.
Love is my downfall and the reason I get up in the morning.
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Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
17th Mar 2025 8:36pm
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17th Mar 2025 8:52pm
I tell myself that every time I go to bed. Love is a lot of things. Most of the time it's positive. That's the important part.
Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
18th Mar 2025 00:06am
Dear M,
This made me think of the partner of perfection that shows up in quiet of the night no one else knows about him. He’s just to be there and loves. Lovely write. H🌷
This made me think of the partner of perfection that shows up in quiet of the night no one else knows about him. He’s just to be there and loves. Lovely write. H🌷
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18th Mar 2025 00:15am
Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
18th Mar 2025 1:44am
Love will always be a blessing in high sight upon a wish upon the peaceful stars 🌟🌟🌟🤩
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18th Mar 2025 1:45am
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Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
18th Mar 2025 2:39am
Beautifully penned, Mary. Into the list it belongs! Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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18th Mar 2025 2:55am
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Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
18th Mar 2025 10:03am
Beautiful, A blanket of stars to protect my sensibilities, that line is great!
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Re. Wished Upon (2/21/2024)
18th Mar 2025 4:29pm
You are such an amazing human, inside and out, and your capacity to really love with everything you have is chronically inspiring.
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