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Touched
I’m lying
in a strange bed
captivated by my own
thoughts,
and unable to
carve out the image
of our hands entwined
against these white sheets
all I can see
in the pitch black
are your veins
popped out
as your forearms shake,
and your tongue rips
my will out
in time with
the slaps
of our
sweaty bodies,
and we catch
our moans
in each other’s
throats as
your chest
hair rakes
my nipples
and
your sweat pools
at my belly button
and baby
I can hear your
name in time
with the bed springs
as you shift
one ankle
on your shoulder
and bury yourself
deeper
and I can’t
stay still as
the orgasm chases me,
bucking until you
grab fistfuls
of my dark brown hair
and ride me like
Armageddon was
chasing your dick
and you had to hide
and in a way it was.
Because the world
ended with
quaking ass muscles
and shouts that
sounded like
love used to
and baby,
you have to
forgive me
for not
elaborating further,
because I’m lying
in a strange bed
thinking about you
and my hands are free
in a strange bed
captivated by my own
thoughts,
and unable to
carve out the image
of our hands entwined
against these white sheets
all I can see
in the pitch black
are your veins
popped out
as your forearms shake,
and your tongue rips
my will out
in time with
the slaps
of our
sweaty bodies,
and we catch
our moans
in each other’s
throats as
your chest
hair rakes
my nipples
and
your sweat pools
at my belly button
and baby
I can hear your
name in time
with the bed springs
as you shift
one ankle
on your shoulder
and bury yourself
deeper
and I can’t
stay still as
the orgasm chases me,
bucking until you
grab fistfuls
of my dark brown hair
and ride me like
Armageddon was
chasing your dick
and you had to hide
and in a way it was.
Because the world
ended with
quaking ass muscles
and shouts that
sounded like
love used to
and baby,
you have to
forgive me
for not
elaborating further,
because I’m lying
in a strange bed
thinking about you
and my hands are free
Author's Note
Stories told at Midnight
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Re. Touched
15th Mar 2025 8:46pm
Atmosphere turns to pheromones....convection.
Michaelangelo thoughts....
Michaelangelo thoughts....
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:39pm
Re. Touched
15th Mar 2025 9:38pm
Your offerings SO remind me of this. . .( always wanted to fuck to it! ).
https://youtu.be/cXrtqiSt8Nw?si=G2dn27AnFZH8SvPj
https://youtu.be/cXrtqiSt8Nw?si=G2dn27AnFZH8SvPj
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:42pm
That is hot as hell.
I fucked to enigma ‘Sadness’ and it was so delicious. Have some plans to do bad things with smooth jazz on the wish list… but this … this is an all night tune.
And I love all nighters
I fucked to enigma ‘Sadness’ and it was so delicious. Have some plans to do bad things with smooth jazz on the wish list… but this … this is an all night tune.
And I love all nighters
Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 2:11am
Hi Betty. Welp this sums up how it all happens.
Being so turned on by a steamy thoughts of some sweaty sex!
The imagery in this is muy caliente so thank you!!
No one does it quite like you:)
Being so turned on by a steamy thoughts of some sweaty sex!
The imagery in this is muy caliente so thank you!!
No one does it quite like you:)
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:43pm
My sister-by-Florida-standards, thank you. I’m going to miss doing it like this.
Gonna miss you guys! Sooo much
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16th Mar 2025 3:48am
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:48pm
Ah well, I’m just an urban legend so.
The genre is called ‘writing from the cunt’ and my buddy and I fucking invented it more than a dozen years ago. (That’s a true story.)
I’m the Thalidomide love child of Charles Bukowski and Sylvia Plath.
And today I’m claiming my crown as godmother of Write From The Cunt.
All hail the Queen of Cunts, Betty!
Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:56am
This is what happens when a poet of your talent writes erotica. It leaves streams of pleasure in my mind and body as I read the flames of your verse. Gritty, powerfully sensual poetry that rakes the coals of my masculinity into a hot fire of desire.
John
John
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:48pm
Re: Re. Touched
Betty, my friend, I am going to miss you loads. Just wanted to say if you have any books out there I'd love to read them. If you have published feel free, if you want to pm me with a link. Would love to have one to read and keep as a memento of your fantastic poetry.
John
John
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 5:14pm
Aw, thank you.
“Sugar” and “Mind The Gaps” both came out last year. Both free on Kindle Unlimited right now or $4.
“Midnight” will be out this summer
https://www.amazon.com/stores/author/B0D4T8PBMT/allbooks
“Sugar” and “Mind The Gaps” both came out last year. Both free on Kindle Unlimited right now or $4.
“Midnight” will be out this summer
https://www.amazon.com/stores/author/B0D4T8PBMT/allbooks
Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 7:12am
Echo Adelphina's comment. Also like the hyperbole of the imagined gymnastics eg:
...your forearms shake,
and your tongue rips
my will out
in time with
the slaps
of our
sweaty bodies,
and we catch
our moans
in each other’s
throats as
your chest
hair rakes
my nipples
and
your sweat pools
at my belly button
and baby
I can hear your
name in time
with the bed springs
as you shift
one ankle
on your shoulder
and bury yourself
deeper
...your forearms shake,
and your tongue rips
my will out
in time with
the slaps
of our
sweaty bodies,
and we catch
our moans
in each other’s
throats as
your chest
hair rakes
my nipples
and
your sweat pools
at my belly button
and baby
I can hear your
name in time
with the bed springs
as you shift
one ankle
on your shoulder
and bury yourself
deeper
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 3:49pm
Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 5:12pm
You have an incredible gift of taking us there...like blushing little voyeurs...well, I'm probably the only one blushing. But damn...that ending blew my mind
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 7:03pm
Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 6:32pm
WillowsWhimsies' comment had me looking at the last line - can sense the frustration:
and my hands are free [but nowhere to go]
and my hands are free [but nowhere to go]
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Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 7:04pm
Oh… they had places to go. That was the hidden naughty bit. Leaving an ‘aha’ moment so the reader knows I was going to one-woman-pound-town three seconds after I wrote this letter…
Re: Re. Touched
16th Mar 2025 8:28pm
Re: Re. Touched
17th Mar 2025 7:17am
"One woman pound town" - an image to conjure with in the mind's eye - love it!
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Re. Touched
22nd Mar 2025 5:14pm
Wow, that was intense and vivid.
Saving this one (and that's all I'm going to say).
Saving this one (and that's all I'm going to say).
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Re: Re. Touched
22nd Mar 2025 6:02pm