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You Make Me Whole
In a world where I could be anything
I chose to be
Part of you
I chose to be
Part of you
Author's Note
“Theres no place like home.”
I’m keeping the sexy sparky shoes. You understand💋
Thank you for being a part of my life.
I’m keeping the sexy sparky shoes. You understand💋
Thank you for being a part of my life.
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Re. You Make Me Whole
13th Mar 2025 9:19am
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13th Mar 2025 10:22pm
Re. You Make Me Whole
13th Mar 2025 10:43am
Perfectly expressed. Keep the shoes...never know where they'll take you next, girl
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13th Mar 2025 12:04pm
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13th Mar 2025 10:22pm
Re. You Make Me Whole
13th Mar 2025 6:07pm
Oh god, my fucking eyes started leaking.
If those shoes are size 11, they're mine beeyotch.
Otherwise? They look perfect on you.
If those shoes are size 11, they're mine beeyotch.
Otherwise? They look perfect on you.
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Size 7….
I’ve been leaking all day. If you keep kissing and telling I’m gonna be a fucking mess.
I’ve been leaking all day. If you keep kissing and telling I’m gonna be a fucking mess.
Re. You Make Me Whole
13th Mar 2025 10:19pm
Yes, put on the dancing shoes tonight and be held on so tight; what a delight. Hugs and love, Oral
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Re. You Make Me Whole
13th Mar 2025 10:59pm
Re. You Make Me Whole
Yesterday 5:22am
The shoes are totally yours, Mary. Beautifully penned, my friend. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Yesterday 10:12am