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Slim Chance
Thinner
sometimes,
but never
thin
enough
sometimes,
but never
thin
enough
Author's Note
When I starved and puked my way down to 105 pounds my junior year of high school I still didn't think I was thin enough.
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Re. Slim Chance
Yesterday 10:38pm
I thought you looked damn good.
Remember that night we went to the Blue Grotto on Red Road in
South Miami ?
Memories ... 36 of them actually
BIG LIKE
Remember that night we went to the Blue Grotto on Red Road in
South Miami ?
Memories ... 36 of them actually
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Slim Chance
Yesterday 11:37pm
Um, no, but thanks. Although our paths do overlap in our Miami timeframe. Maybe we were both once in the same Burger King or something.
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Yesterday 11:51pm
Some crazy times down there...
Almost got arrested a few times for indecent activities.
Poetspeak was born at U of M ..
Almost got arrested a few times for indecent activities.
Poetspeak was born at U of M ..
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Re. Slim Chance
Yesterday 11:13pm
We always think slimmer is better. Society makes us think that way. We starve ourselves so that we feel acceptable, so that we can feel loved when all we are doing is starving our hearts.
There’s an entire planet of women and a whole bunch of men that feel this way. And for what? A whole lotta heartache is all because no matter how small we get, that’s how we feel. Small. Still not enough. Still not lovable.
Solid write, Pink.
There’s an entire planet of women and a whole bunch of men that feel this way. And for what? A whole lotta heartache is all because no matter how small we get, that’s how we feel. Small. Still not enough. Still not lovable.
Solid write, Pink.
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Re: Re. Slim Chance
Yesterday 11:38pm
Thanks Mary. Your words are so true. In high school I got smaller,but still felt too small inside.
Re: Re. Slim Chance
Today 3:08am
Re. Slim Chance
Today 00:11am
Be comfortable in your skin. Someone will always love you for the way you are. Great piece Pinkdreams
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Today 4:09am
Re. Slim Chance
Today 00:40am
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Today 1:14am
Thank you. But too many men consider women fat pigs if they weigh over 120 pounds. And many of those men are overweight themselves.
Re. Slim Chance
Today 2:24am
Spinal Tap said it best...
[Verse 1]
"The bigger the cushion, the sweeter the pushin'
That's what I said
The looser the waistband, the deeper the quicksand
Or so I have read
[PreChorus 1]
My baby fits me like a flesh tuxedo
I'd like to sink her with my pink torpedo
[Chorus 1]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about bum cakes, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?
[Verse 2]
I met her on Monday, 'twas my lucky bun day
You know what I mean
I love her each weekday, each velvety cheek day
You know what I mean
[PreChorus 2]
My love gun's loaded and she's in my sights
Big game is waiting there inside her tights, yeah
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[Chorus 2]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about mud flaps, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?
[PreChorus 1]
My baby fits me like a flesh tuxedo
I'd like to sink her with my pink torpedo
[Chorus 1]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about bum cakes, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?"
[Verse 1]
"The bigger the cushion, the sweeter the pushin'
That's what I said
The looser the waistband, the deeper the quicksand
Or so I have read
[PreChorus 1]
My baby fits me like a flesh tuxedo
I'd like to sink her with my pink torpedo
[Chorus 1]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about bum cakes, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?
[Verse 2]
I met her on Monday, 'twas my lucky bun day
You know what I mean
I love her each weekday, each velvety cheek day
You know what I mean
[PreChorus 2]
My love gun's loaded and she's in my sights
Big game is waiting there inside her tights, yeah
See upcoming rock shows
Get tickets for your favorite artists
You might also like
Heavy Duty
Spinal Tap
Hell Hole
Spinal Tap
Tonight I’m Gonna Rock You Tonight
Spinal Tap
[Chorus 2]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about mud flaps, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?
[PreChorus 1]
My baby fits me like a flesh tuxedo
I'd like to sink her with my pink torpedo
[Chorus 1]
Big bottom, big bottom
Talk about bum cakes, my girl's got 'em
Big bottom drive me out of my mind
How could I leave this behind?"
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Re: Re. Slim Chance
I LOVE Spinal Tap. Like, my love for it goes up to 11.
I want to write lyrics like this. I think I'm going to try.
I want to write lyrics like this. I think I'm going to try.
Re: Re. Slim Chance
Today 4:06am
LOL !!!
You damn well ought to!
If anyone at DUP can match Spinal Tap awesomeness, it will be you:)
You damn well ought to!
If anyone at DUP can match Spinal Tap awesomeness, it will be you:)
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Today 4:11am