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You wanted freedom
I have read beauty in the sweet abandoned
To let go and be free
To enjoy life in all its splendor
When the sweet turns sour
Abandon turns to forsaken
Beauty is fleeting
The freedom you crave becomes a lonesome trek
You wonder
Your mind strolls
Trying to see the detour in the road
There was no sign to turn left or stop
Now your at the end of your road
To let go and be free
To enjoy life in all its splendor
When the sweet turns sour
Abandon turns to forsaken
Beauty is fleeting
The freedom you crave becomes a lonesome trek
You wonder
Your mind strolls
Trying to see the detour in the road
There was no sign to turn left or stop
Now your at the end of your road
Published 1st Mar 2025
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Musing
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1st Mar 2025 10:54pm
When you get to the "end of the road", backing up provides a new adventure. Great poem. Hugs and love, Oal
1st Mar 2025 10:55pm
1st Mar 2025 10:57pm
Dear Fia... May all you love & you're dreaming of, be there... at the end of the road. Da da da dadada da dada. (It's a song) 😉
1st Mar 2025 11:00pm
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1st Mar 2025 11:32pm
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1st Mar 2025 11:34pm
1st Mar 2025 11:42pm
Sorry to butt in (JD Vance style) lol but that is also in that song... keep right on to the end of the road... keep right on to the end. 😊
2nd Mar 2025 00:45am
2nd Mar 2025 3:32am
Great musing Fia. Got me thinking about beauty and adventure
How they sometimes intersect and cause us to change directions
You just never know. There is beauty in that too.
How they sometimes intersect and cause us to change directions
You just never know. There is beauty in that too.
2nd Mar 2025 3:38am
2nd Mar 2025 4:30am
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Always love your musings, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
2nd Mar 2025 4:31am
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2nd Mar 2025 3:32pm
Love this. You inspired me to write a minimalist piece I'm about to post. Thanks
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