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sometimes randomly
someone reminds us
that rivalry is a realm
and ignites
that fractal ripple
you have waited for
all the pebbles in the waters
did not create just that orb
rivalry can be
just that obsolete reflection
a cutting cord
this curtain is falling
a thespian shade
the one that frees you
with sussing sounds
please say I didnt warn you
this altered state
six months thin fried baked air
that could be will be would be
ought have been state
today gathering each
nothingness
I limped out
away from his sight
blessed draconian dagger
has sliced all
though you can not
cut fire in half
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that rivalry is a realm
and ignites
that fractal ripple
you have waited for
all the pebbles in the waters
did not create just that orb
rivalry can be
just that obsolete reflection
a cutting cord
this curtain is falling
a thespian shade
the one that frees you
with sussing sounds
please say I didnt warn you
this altered state
six months thin fried baked air
that could be will be would be
ought have been state
today gathering each
nothingness
I limped out
away from his sight
blessed draconian dagger
has sliced all
though you can not
cut fire in half
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Published Yesterday
Author's Note
This card was just SO significant for the man I was recently dating, finally let go of this man, what a relief! PHEW, card from Somlipith card deck
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Yesterday 2:14pm
A very powerful card for a very unfortunate situation, RiAnne. The poem perfectly reflects the meaning and highlights your strength in releasing and moving on. Love.
Today 6:28am
Thank you dear Ahavati, these cards are usually quite accurate on the issues more related to people and relationships, love the images, love and blessings
Rianne
Rianne
The trials and tribulations etc etc. Articulated well. I've never discussed my ex wife on here, but oh boy, was that marriage a sham and destructive. Everyone told me she was soooo controlling, but too young & stupid to listen . I may still be stupid, but cathartic dwellings and self-awareness affords a termination.
Today 6:30am
Thank you Wob for sharing some parts of your own life experience. Sometimes something suddenly gave give a bit of insight though it usually comes afterwards, much love and blessings your way!
Rianne
Rianne
Yesterday 6:22pm
Rivalry is the word of the day for me.. had been using this earlier in context of India vs Pak cricket match today here .. n i see sync here in your dark interpretation in here .. the write n the context with the card .. flows such in its bold n meaningful interpretation .. amidst whatever tricky manipulation n twists there in .. light is always there.. for those truthful ones.. in within mainly.. loved that last verse .. fire is ever One flaming one power in all its truth xx
Today 6:32am
Dear Uma, it is always fascinating to see how there are times when poets or poems have the same themes, sometimes even words. And each recreates the theme in their own way. Your words are very reflective and always contain valuable insights, love and blessings to you, xox, Rianne
Today 4:33am
Maybe there were already a few signs it wasn't heading in the best direction.
I'm not much of a card reader but if it gave you the strength or confirmation to
get out of a relationship that was heading nowhere, I'm all for it:)
Sometimes we give people the benefit of the doubt and it ends up being a mistake.
I'm not much of a card reader but if it gave you the strength or confirmation to
get out of a relationship that was heading nowhere, I'm all for it:)
Sometimes we give people the benefit of the doubt and it ends up being a mistake.
Today 6:38am
So nice to see you here on my page Adelphina! Personally I see cards as a tool for self insights. I have stopped using these for any decisions though because it can get habitual and I do believe the decision is mine to make. Yes the signs were there, overseen from an early stage. Letting go can be the best option sometimes, love and blessings, Rianne
