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The Start Of A Great Weekend
I looked out my window just before
On the other side of the street
I saw a man put a gun to a dog's head and blow the dog's brains all over the place
He bought his kid out next, placed the gun to his temple and shot his tiny head all over his driveway
Personally, I think it's alright
The kid was constantly shitting on my lawn and the dog was making way too much noise
Good Riddance!
On the other side of the street
I saw a man put a gun to a dog's head and blow the dog's brains all over the place
He bought his kid out next, placed the gun to his temple and shot his tiny head all over his driveway
Personally, I think it's alright
The kid was constantly shitting on my lawn and the dog was making way too much noise
Good Riddance!
Published 21st Feb 2025
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22nd Feb 2025 2:31pm
22nd Feb 2025 2:42pm
The tolerance n inclusiveness .. whatever we call.. the shrinking consciousness is in the horrific terrible mishap owning by such brutalities you say here Keith.. the narrative taking a side on them is what makes this read even more indigestibly inhumane..
Kaliyuga (age of lies) is what is this.. such inhumaneness n lies n blood n mindless war n deaths .. need to & will perish .. for towards the Satyayuga (age of truth) .. the truthful realm with full consciousness blooms as lotus as sages .. jus me from your brutal write done fine .. you can discount the Indian references i say here, I always say them though :)
Kaliyuga (age of lies) is what is this.. such inhumaneness n lies n blood n mindless war n deaths .. need to & will perish .. for towards the Satyayuga (age of truth) .. the truthful realm with full consciousness blooms as lotus as sages .. jus me from your brutal write done fine .. you can discount the Indian references i say here, I always say them though :)
22nd Feb 2025 5:37pm
Not everything is peaches & cream. Though I live a very humble and tranquil lifestyle, my stories aren't. What tales we can conjure up in our fucked up minds...right?
25th Feb 2025 1:50pm
Hahahaha at least he's a good neighbor! Maybe not the best family man.....
25th Feb 2025 1:53pm
