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Crystal Winter Sky
The day moves so slowly
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
Frozen in it's breath
Sun goes down so lonely
In the distant frosty west
Cold, malevolent winds are blowing
All hope has gone away
While fading life is flowing
Into a wintry, snowy haze
Icicles frozen in time
A snow angel spreads her wings to fly
Church bells and gongs chime
Hands reach out into a crystal winter sky
Published 21st Feb 2025
Author's Note
For the Seasons of the abyss comp
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21st Feb 2025 11:40pm
21st Feb 2025 11:41pm
22nd Feb 2025 2:20am
Your write brings the image to life. Here's some warm appreciation for your frosty poem.
22nd Feb 2025 11:16am
22nd Feb 2025 4:21am
Beautifully penned, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Best of luck in the competition, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
22nd Feb 2025 11:17am
Thanks Damian. I went a bit more melodic with this one. Appreciate the RL.
22nd Feb 2025 9:00am
What a beautiful piece, the imagery is amazing - and... it has a snow angel :-) (I love snow angels)
22nd Feb 2025 11:18am
I usually make snow demons in the snow but I'll work with the snow angels with you & this piece. Thank you Duende for the RL.
In spite of it all .. the pitch darkness n the murderous frozenness in all it’s greys .. yes yes there you go do beautifully in your last 3 liners.. the shining pure hope .. finely captured the nature in it’s essence of Hope light & love .. finely written & best for comp dear Keith :) xx
22nd Feb 2025 2:41pm
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22nd Feb 2025 4:07pm
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22nd Feb 2025 4:09pm
I have heard how important ice or icicles are to some living in the tundra. I can understand that. It's part of their life.
I appreciate you Rianne. Thanks!!
I appreciate you Rianne. Thanks!!
25th Feb 2025 1:49pm
25th Feb 2025 1:52pm
