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Mamas Don't
Text
Mama, please don’t leave
Daddy is having a hard time.
He said he can’t look at me
He cries all the time
Text
Mamas don’t usually go
You left me here, just me
Daddy is so angry
I just don’t understand this though
Text
Mama, Why don’t you come home?
Daddy has been gone
He leaves me here a lot on my own
I didn’t ask to be alone
Mama's Text
Baby girl, I’m sorry to say
I didn’t want to tell you when I left that day
I set your daddy free
So, He can find you a new mommy
It’s not easy to let you both go
I will watch you from above
You both are my light
You both are my loves
I left, hoping he would hate me
Love another and set me free
This is not your fault, it is my own
Know you are never alone
Your mama didn’t want to leave.
Better than hearing from a doctor you see
Now let your daddy read this
He’ll finally understand
I could have done this better
I didn’t want him to hold a cold hand
I love you, baby girl
Mama
Mama, please don’t leave
Daddy is having a hard time.
He said he can’t look at me
He cries all the time
Text
Mamas don’t usually go
You left me here, just me
Daddy is so angry
I just don’t understand this though
Text
Mama, Why don’t you come home?
Daddy has been gone
He leaves me here a lot on my own
I didn’t ask to be alone
Mama's Text
Baby girl, I’m sorry to say
I didn’t want to tell you when I left that day
I set your daddy free
So, He can find you a new mommy
It’s not easy to let you both go
I will watch you from above
You both are my light
You both are my loves
I left, hoping he would hate me
Love another and set me free
This is not your fault, it is my own
Know you are never alone
Your mama didn’t want to leave.
Better than hearing from a doctor you see
Now let your daddy read this
He’ll finally understand
I could have done this better
I didn’t want him to hold a cold hand
I love you, baby girl
Mama
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 19th Feb 2025
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19th Feb 2025 9:46pm
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19th Feb 2025 9:37pm
this one is hard hittin. very confusin for a kid. text style makes it feel real. good write.
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19th Feb 2025 9:49pm
Re. Mamas Don't
19th Feb 2025 10:20pm
A beautiful tribute indeed for sure they may be gone yet they never left you for just look up above that is where you will see them floating on a cloud looking down up you with a SMILE 😁🙏👏
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19th Feb 2025 10:22pm
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Re. Mamas Don't
19th Feb 2025 11:37pm
A heartfelt piece you captured so well Fia. Great dialogue and an authentic realism between mom and daughter.
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19th Feb 2025 11:44pm
Re. Mamas Don't
20th Feb 2025 3:12am
Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs. If your goal was to make me teary eyed, you've succeeded magnificently. This ripped at my heartstrings, my friend. Brilliantly executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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20th Feb 2025 3:13am
Re. Mamas Don't
20th Feb 2025 3:51am
I loved the emotional switch that flipped inside me concerning her (2nd verse of Mamma's Text) when you told me she did not leave but died. Excellently crafted!
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Re. Mamas Don't
20th Feb 2025 5:47am
Dear F,
Ooofah! That was a gut wrencher of a write. The text format made this such a here and now style of poetry. Very sad subject, excellent write. H🌷
Ooofah! That was a gut wrencher of a write. The text format made this such a here and now style of poetry. Very sad subject, excellent write. H🌷
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20th Feb 2025 12:18pm
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Re: Re. Mamas Don't
20th Feb 2025 3:53pm
Thank you, Rianne
I agree children see and don't understand, but they want to fix it anyway.
I agree children see and don't understand, but they want to fix it anyway.