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The Last Thing One Needs On Date Night
Tom went to Lauren's house.
He wanted to take her out dancing.
That's before she walked in.
She's wearing a black dress.
She smiled and asked "You like it?"
Tom answered with a kiss.
That's before Kara came home.
She insisted that the lovebirds leave soon.
Kara and Lauren's dad's outside.
He also brought their mom.
They insisted on meeting Lauren's newfound date.
They also wanna talk marriage.
Tom and Lauren snuck out the back.
They were gone before her parents showed.
He wanted to take her out dancing.
That's before she walked in.
She's wearing a black dress.
She smiled and asked "You like it?"
Tom answered with a kiss.
That's before Kara came home.
She insisted that the lovebirds leave soon.
Kara and Lauren's dad's outside.
He also brought their mom.
They insisted on meeting Lauren's newfound date.
They also wanna talk marriage.
Tom and Lauren snuck out the back.
They were gone before her parents showed.
Published 19th Feb 2025
Author's Note
This is my first sonneku poem which is about one young woman going out somewhere and not let her parents embarrass her.
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