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There's no wrong way, just cum
She likes to be slapped when she comes
She'll be getting all hot and then she'll scream
"DO IT!!"
I slap her until she's finished
She likes me to slap her right after I cum in her mouth
I'll cum, push her head back and let her have it
I dig watching my cum fly out of her mouth and get stuck in her hair
It gets me off
It's a rush to see her get off
We make a perfect couple for that moment in the sack
I love her......sometimes
She'll be getting all hot and then she'll scream
"DO IT!!"
I slap her until she's finished
She likes me to slap her right after I cum in her mouth
I'll cum, push her head back and let her have it
I dig watching my cum fly out of her mouth and get stuck in her hair
It gets me off
It's a rush to see her get off
We make a perfect couple for that moment in the sack
I love her......sometimes
Published 17th Feb 2025
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17th Feb 2025 1:27pm
17th Feb 2025 1:30pm
17th Feb 2025 7:36pm
lol the last liner.. well done dirty erotica that’s simmering hot n exploding. Btw had heard read many a turn ons in eroticas .. did I read it right right? you said of a turn off right.. tats real honest bit to add on authenticity:)
You are a hot digging n a red revolutionary n a mystic romantic .. n a satirical brutal .. n whatnot versatile poet ..much more dimensions so at genius prolific flexing ease .. inspiration ev u r ..write in shine on Keith xx
You are a hot digging n a red revolutionary n a mystic romantic .. n a satirical brutal .. n whatnot versatile poet ..much more dimensions so at genius prolific flexing ease .. inspiration ev u r ..write in shine on Keith xx
17th Feb 2025 9:33pm
I try & write from what brewing in my head. Don't matter where I go, I'll just put it out there for all to read. Thank you Uma for your lovely comments...always.
18th Feb 2025 00:24am
18th Feb 2025 00:31am
They took my goddamn picture down.Well read this comment and you'll see the image again.
18th Feb 2025 3:34am
18th Feb 2025 10:47am
If you allowed to write smut here then the image should be allowed. Thanks for reading
19th Feb 2025 10:05pm
19th Feb 2025 11:25pm
She's nice only when it comes to the bedroom...They took my photo down again. FUCK!
19th Feb 2025 11:30pm
19th Feb 2025 11:32pm
20th Feb 2025 00:48am
Or she cums when she is slapped... ;) mmmm... to be disciplined...
Like a little brat needs.
"DO IT"
I want to feel the sting, the numbness, the pain
But I wouldn't waste a drop letting it fly out.
After all it is an anti-depressant for women
"I love her.....sometimes" haha, love it!
You would love me as I drink you in... that's for sure.
Like a little brat needs.
"DO IT"
I want to feel the sting, the numbness, the pain
But I wouldn't waste a drop letting it fly out.
After all it is an anti-depressant for women
"I love her.....sometimes" haha, love it!
You would love me as I drink you in... that's for sure.
20th Feb 2025 10:53am
Kristina!!! Long time no speak. Thanks so much for the read and comment!
Hey if she loves being slapped, then goddamn let's do that! I probably would love it as you drink me in..No doubt.
You rock...hard! xo
Hey if she loves being slapped, then goddamn let's do that! I probably would love it as you drink me in..No doubt.
You rock...hard! xo
