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a passionate drive
you're
the fragrance of my soul,
you're
the reason of my joy,
you're
the craving of my curves,
you're
the most pleasurable desire
of my sweet puffs,
you're
the only one who leaves
briar scratch notes on my skin,
you're
the one who creates rock music
inside me with the sharpness of your teeth,
you're
that morning sun who kisses my tulip,
you're
the one who is ready
to give friction to my sighing petals
you're
the one who can claim every crack of my body,
you're
the one who can feel every demands of my body,
you're
the one who fills my tenderness
with your cream coloured hardness,
it is you only
who fills the walls of my white room
with moans of happiness,
and you know?
i feel your presence every day
in such a tinkling air of love,
n i hear such moans every day
when you are not there...
Published 17th Feb 2025
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17th Feb 2025 4:46am
Wow, that's...intense and really passionate. It sounds like you feel deeply connected to this person.
hello there
thank you for reading my stuff...n yaay there is a connection, but not for long life ; ) i want more exciting experience ...
thank you for reading my stuff...n yaay there is a connection, but not for long life ; ) i want more exciting experience ...
17th Feb 2025 4:53am
17th Feb 2025 7:45am
17th Feb 2025 6:18am
Passionate piece with its list of compliments for the lover. Favourite lines:
you're
the one who creates rock music
inside me with the sharpness of your teeth,
you're
the one who fills my tenderness
with your cream coloured hardness,
it is you only
who fills the walls of my white room
with moans of happiness,
you're
the one who creates rock music
inside me with the sharpness of your teeth,
you're
the one who fills my tenderness
with your cream coloured hardness,
it is you only
who fills the walls of my white room
with moans of happiness,
17th Feb 2025 7:46am
17th Feb 2025 12:21pm
Reminds me of the song WHITE ROOM by Cream back in the 1960s.
You should check it out if you don't know it.
Famous line:
"In a white room with black curtains at the station"
Hot creamy write dimp
BIG LIKE
You should check it out if you don't know it.
Famous line:
"In a white room with black curtains at the station"
Hot creamy write dimp
BIG LIKE
17th Feb 2025 12:47pm
I have no any idea about that WHITE ROOM... but thank you for reading... appreciate
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