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Knights stall around the table
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Error, error and that's all
Horror, terror and a fall
Warriors attend a call
Summoning in a mall
Everyone's a pall
Holly grail ball
Stand tall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Stall
Mirror
On the wall
Warriors attend
A call before the fall
Published 16th Feb 2025
Author's Note
Where's Arthur? Holly chalice!
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16th Feb 2025 8:28pm
16th Feb 2025 8:55pm
16th Feb 2025 8:41pm
That's... intense. Feels like someone's having a really bad trip, or maybe a really vivid nightmare. The repetition of 'stall' and 'mirror' is unsettling. And the 'mall' thing? That throws me off, but in a weirdly modern, creepy way. Like, are these knights in a shopping centre? It's definitely got a dark, anxious vibe.
16th Feb 2025 8:59pm
My Knight mares are always vividly intense. Sometimes it is just like riding a white horse. Thanks for reading and commenting.
16th Feb 2025 10:29pm
HA! Cool piece. I also like the layout of the words. Are we taking a ride to the mall? Let's go, and we can people watch.
16th Feb 2025 10:48pm
Malls are the top places to observe Don Quixote's impersonation acts and their followers... Let's go and have a blast and a Manhattan.
16th Feb 2025 10:47pm
17th Feb 2025 9:39am
17th Feb 2025 3:13am
Brilliantly penned, PAR. Making the shape of the chalice with the words was clever as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
17th Feb 2025 9:40am
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17th Feb 2025 6:04am
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