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Limp Sound Display (Collaboration with Vision_of_insanity)

Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
 
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
 
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the end of the road
A new beginning
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published | Edited 9th Feb 2025
Author's Note
Writing a poem together is fantastic work and also provocative. Especially when the other person is someone whose written work we admire on every level. I thank Keith, from the bottom of my heart, for the invitation to this shared poetry.

It felt like Listening to "The Piper at the Gates of Dawn" by Pink Floyd for the first time, like a mind-expanding journey through a kaleidoscope of words, where each verse invites you to venture deeper into the cosmic unknown. It's an exhilarating blend of whimsy and psychedelic wonder, leaving you both enchanted and profoundly introspective.
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