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Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the end of the road
A new beginning
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find the stairway at the end of the road
A new beginning
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Author's Note
Writing a poem together is fantastic work and also provocative. Especially when the other person is someone whose written work we admire on every level. I thank Keith, from the bottom of my heart, for the invitation to this shared poetry.
It felt like Listening to "The Piper at the Gates of Dawn" by Pink Floyd for the first time, like a mind-expanding journey through a kaleidoscope of words, where each verse invites you to venture deeper into the cosmic unknown. It's an exhilarating blend of whimsy and psychedelic wonder, leaving you both enchanted and profoundly introspective.
It felt like Listening to "The Piper at the Gates of Dawn" by Pink Floyd for the first time, like a mind-expanding journey through a kaleidoscope of words, where each verse invites you to venture deeper into the cosmic unknown. It's an exhilarating blend of whimsy and psychedelic wonder, leaving you both enchanted and profoundly introspective.
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Today 3:53pm
AMAZING! Our words and ideas blended together so well for this amazing psychedelic experience! Hats off to you my friend. Also, a great reference to Floyd's debut. Best album they ever did! Hands down!
Today 4:28pm
Today 4:51pm
hello dearest Par and Keith this is fantastic it is mind bendingly beautiful 💕
Today 5:06pm
Today 9:53pm
Brilliantly penned, PAR & Keith. Great collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
Damian
Today 10:40pm
