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Hi i'm Bobby
Helo Ooooma,
You have poems that put a smile on my lips.
Theyre writen with great love and purpse.
My frend in schol is from India
I ask her if she owns a elphaent or lion?
She loked at me like I was stuped
Mayb one time i can vizit u.
By fore now
Youre frend bobby
You have poems that put a smile on my lips.
Theyre writen with great love and purpse.
My frend in schol is from India
I ask her if she owns a elphaent or lion?
She loked at me like I was stuped
Mayb one time i can vizit u.
By fore now
Youre frend bobby
Published 5th Feb 2025
Author's Note
Bobby is 7 years old and loves adventure, animals and traveling. He enjoys Uma Summultima's poetry and one day would love to visit India.
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5th Feb 2025 4:06pm
5th Feb 2025 4:09pm
Gods Keith, this is a lovely lovely write from the lively bubbly Bobby :) the worded misspellings.. feel so warmth n love . & yes, like most presume India being a page from The Jungle Book.. he too thinks so in his cute boyishness:) not to disappoint, waiting for him for an adventurous jungle safari sure lol . my love to him n the poetic you xxox
5th Feb 2025 7:26pm
Greetings Uma. Yes Bobby thinks all of India is one vast safari. He's eager to visit India. Thank you for the comments and RL. Appreciate it. xxoxo
6th Feb 2025 7:46am
Anytime hez welcome here for the safari :) btw OOOooma reminds me of my one college mate who fondly calls me such every time.. reminded of that n him :) thanks again Keith fir a wonderfully lovely cute series that is still greatly on .. appreciating du poets . It’s novel in conveyance , bonding us more in love xx
5th Feb 2025 8:36pm
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6th Feb 2025 2:40pm
Oh, the smiles this piece gave me when I found out you placed yourself in the shoes of a 7 year old boy. Your author's note is simply epic. Enjoyed this one :-)
6th Feb 2025 2:55pm
Hello Duende,
How are you? I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece. I've written a few at this point. Thanks my friend!! xo
How are you? I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece. I've written a few at this point. Thanks my friend!! xo
