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This is jimmy
Deer Aftersixdalleema
I like your storieees
My freind live nearbye says that u have a snake
I have a dog. Hes name is Rocky
Winter recesss soon. wood like to come over and have my dog eat your snake
Let my no
Your freind jimmy
I like your storieees
My freind live nearbye says that u have a snake
I have a dog. Hes name is Rocky
Winter recesss soon. wood like to come over and have my dog eat your snake
Let my no
Your freind jimmy
Published 4th Feb 2025
Author's Note
Jimmy is 8 years old and enjoys animals. He also loves ASD's poetry.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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The author encourages honest critique.
4th Feb 2025 3:29pm
4th Feb 2025 3:32pm
I think he meant if his dog can meet your snake. Jimmy's spelling isn't so great.
Thanks ASD, I'll let him know.
Thanks ASD, I'll let him know.
4th Feb 2025 3:34pm
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4th Feb 2025 3:36pm
Both Jimmy n Timmy are speaking such truthful innocence in your posted sweet poems Keith .. good novelistic conveyance :)
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5th Feb 2025 10:02am
Jimmy is like children should be; innocent and honest, speaking out loud whatever crosses their mind. Great job, Keith!
5th Feb 2025 11:23am
