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Beltane blues on a winter’s day haiku
Beltane blues on a winter’s day haiku
pink blush
of her sunset cheeks
glow of youth
hidden
in her turtle neck sweater
golden hills of Eden
path of palms
for her evening stroll
heavenly parade
scent
of mown grass
she gathers her skirt
her masala dish
dazzles my taste buds
she winks
the pleats
of her windblown skirt
naked summer
pink blush
of her sunset cheeks
glow of youth
hidden
in her turtle neck sweater
golden hills of Eden
path of palms
for her evening stroll
heavenly parade
scent
of mown grass
she gathers her skirt
her masala dish
dazzles my taste buds
she winks
the pleats
of her windblown skirt
naked summer
Published 3rd Feb 2025
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4th Feb 2025 2:51am
4th Feb 2025 3:19am
Thank you so much Pinkdreams. Love what you see in these as your vision is a reflection of their essence.
John
John
A beautiful and evocative haiku collection!
These haikus celebrate the beauty of nature, with images like "golden hills of Eden", "path of palms", and "scent of mown grass" evoking a sense of paradise and wonder. If not for anything else, the above images I'm always favorable of. Gallantly written!
These haikus celebrate the beauty of nature, with images like "golden hills of Eden", "path of palms", and "scent of mown grass" evoking a sense of paradise and wonder. If not for anything else, the above images I'm always favorable of. Gallantly written!
4th Feb 2025 6:05pm
Thank you so much Numer90. Love that the sensual experience was communicated here through my words in a way that conveyed the beauty of nature with a feminine focus. :)
John
John
4th Feb 2025 3:30pm
sensually brimming pithy beauty thus is dear poet .. loved that naked summer much. thanks John fir sharing xx
4th Feb 2025 6:06pm
Uma, your poetic words on my haiku find a place in my heart. I am most grateful to you. Love that your loved that last line. Really made my day something altogether special. :)
John
John
