Go Ahead, TRY IT!

Bang on.

Anyone can kill a body but a body ain't you.

In fact who are you? Certainly not your body and certainly not a permanent unchanging entity.

Good write and right up my alley.

Thanks man. Glad you can relate. Awesome! We all have our own identities. No one can take that from us. Ever!

Powerful write, Keith. Dig it. Appreciate you.

Damian

Awesome. Thanks my friend.

Ah this is super strong in the delivery.. in the determined ( & that warning) tone of a the righteous anger that we call as “Rowthiram” (in Tamil) or Rowdra ( in Sanskrit ) ..  
am quickly reminded of my fav ever Tamil Legendary poet - Subramanya Bharathi (pre-independence India’s revolutionary Tamil poet) by this brave n BOLD tone . Deeply going into this, says the permanence of mind heart & soul .. the unbent & never kneeling down ideals & braveness of them that remains forever etched in us, in elements, in pages n time n beyond.. even if a petty or slyly plotted killing of a death takes off merely that body .. powerfully put Keith xx

Hello Uma,
So happy that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you! Always stay strong, stay vigilant, stay true to who you are, no matter what comes up throughout life.
Thank you for the RL and comments.

"Wow, this is incredibly powerful! Your words are like a punch to the gut, leaving me breathless and wanting more. The way you've woven together themes of resilience and self-empowerment is truly masterful. Keep speaking your truth and inspiring others to do the same!"

Thanks Numer90. People should always stand up for what they truly believe in. Always the truth, always push forward. Thanks for the awesome comments.

I love it! I always get that attitude whenever my daughter is around. Id walk through fire for her.

I get it. It's your child. You would do anything for her. Thanks for the RL.