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the past
I’ve been
for some time now
no longer rooted in
my current days.
I stride instead
primarily inside
the shadow land
of aching images and  memories
full grounded
in my Oxford
and my Pittsburgh past.
Nostalgia is my company
I walk with ghosts
for some time now
no longer rooted in
my current days.
I stride instead
primarily inside
the shadow land
of aching images and  memories
full grounded
in my Oxford
and my Pittsburgh past.
Nostalgia is my company
I walk with ghosts
Published 29th Jan 2025
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