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You
The way my back feels
against the warmth
of your chest
joy
safety
all encompassing
you’re like a warm bath just as I settle in
comforting
enveloped
a small sigh escapes my lips
a slight smile
before the inevitable destruction
I always welcome
against the warmth
of your chest
joy
safety
all encompassing
you’re like a warm bath just as I settle in
comforting
enveloped
a small sigh escapes my lips
a slight smile
before the inevitable destruction
I always welcome
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Dear M,
I enjoyed this write. You had me heading down this path of comfort with some sizzle and the connection between two lovers and then WHAM! The explosion of this is not a forever situation and for me I’d already start thinking “I want you to go. I want to be alone and go to sleep. Now!”
Fab piece. H🌷
I enjoyed this write. You had me heading down this path of comfort with some sizzle and the connection between two lovers and then WHAM! The explosion of this is not a forever situation and for me I’d already start thinking “I want you to go. I want to be alone and go to sleep. Now!”
Fab piece. H🌷
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