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Gabriel Came Home From California
Gabriel came home from California.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
Published 27th Jan 2025
Author's Note
This one awesoku poem is about the shocking surprise that one half of a couple has received after coming home to surprise the other half.
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